AOWL Week 7: Cereal_Killa (1-0) vs. King Keith (3-1) [KING KEITH WINS, 6-4.]

[Frank]

Cereal_killa; colorful post. You wrote from a blue perspective, no greens to show case intellect? no browns to showcase groundedness? no pink this week? I'm sorry, if your using colors, they should be on point. I see you used purple to contrast blue, as in bruising. But the blues weren't color phased correctly - Light to dark, rather dark to light. Things to think about... You lost track of your original idea a bit. Red section was my favorite.

King Keith; You ventured to that realm on this one. Longest written of the season; and perhaps one of the most intricate. As a matter of fact this is the most animated match up in the history of the AOWL; color wise; format wise. Two pioneers here. Ra, what I found is writing mags seems to help your writing. Is this not true? Completely flabbergasted here. Epic piece from Keith; his best to date.

I'm voting for King Keith here. Cereal_Killas nice; Not sure if he is gay and black but that hasn't nothing to do with this. I am color blind. The decision boiled down to cohesion. One verse was easier on the eyes;