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Old 08-31-2014, 12:23 PM   #9
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I enjoyed both verse. Each had solid rhymes and both actually had a story to tell. One was a phone sex call, abruptly ending in the middle of climax. The other, a story of death. I preferred the story of a man dying and what he saw while dying

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