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08-30-2014, 08:12 AM
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Both had some great imagery. I think Engs was a bit more complete and polished, although both couldn't get out a full succinct story in the time allotted. I liked what UB wrote about, I think it was all over the place because it IS a fantasy, but I still think his story should've went somewhere. Engs did, but it also didn't end in my eyes.
My vote goes to Eng
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