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Old 04-01-2013, 07:20 PM   #12
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zenland; i guess what does not kill you; makes you stronger. this week you switch your style around and it pays off. wacky verse. good method acting. you took on the character and his attributes and presented them in a deranged display. the flow was cool; very much alive. word choice was on-point; nothing to waver my attention or wander my perspective. this verse; for what it was; was a little crazy; not quite straight jacket - but lower level looney bin. lol.

kuja;
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I worked alone, armed with a palette of scarlet tones
Painting my victims down to the white marble bones
that was the route you needed to go to evoke a chilling demeanor. verse played the surface; was a rough sketch of something more dubious. kudos for showing. wasn't enthralled.

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