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This was a good read from both parts.
I was fond of Blanc's direction, and I felt he illustrated it very well. I for one don't think he took the cliche path interpreting the topic, although it might seem a bit more predictable. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it. Still, Darth Yoda verse was definitely written with more vitality. Everything about it was admirable. The language was eloquent, and the rhyming was superb. Although I for one liked Blanc's topic directionality I still have to give it to Darth Yoda due to superior craftsmanship, in this case. Vote: Darth Yoda Thank you both. |
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