Round 1: 8. YDK vs. 9. Mike Wrecka \\ Mike Wrecka wins 5-0

UnbornBuddha · 08-29-2014, 06:19 PM

This topic could have been extrapolated into various formats. YDK went with what was pertinent to his life, in an immediate reality kind of way. Mike Wrecka almost seemed to question the validity in his life, a mere observer depicted meek at the feet of life's grandiosity.
YDK verse explored love's interrelationship with his own essence. Although there is a sketching of the thematic factor, nevertheless it lacked the sophistication of it unraveling. He obviously explored it, but did not give the impression of its embodiment. The theme is basically of embodiment, one's image of what one represents which can be interpreted from a universal perspective to a more individualistic perspective. Both chose the latter, although Mike Wrecka delved deeper into the navigation of one's life worth.
Thus, exploring the experiences that life presents, but in a defeatist fashion due to the inherent wounds and obstacles it has given him.

In terms of commonalities the rhyming was nothing too spectacular either.

Anyways, my vote for Mike Wrecka.

Thank you both.

08-29-2014, 06:19 PM	#1
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	This topic could have been extrapolated into various formats. YDK went with what was pertinent to his life, in an immediate reality kind of way. Mike Wrecka almost seemed to question the validity in his life, a mere observer depicted meek at the feet of life's grandiosity. YDK verse explored love's interrelationship with his own essence. Although there is a sketching of the thematic factor, nevertheless it lacked the sophistication of it unraveling. He obviously explored it, but did not give the impression of its embodiment. The theme is basically of embodiment, one's image of what one represents which can be interpreted from a universal perspective to a more individualistic perspective. Both chose the latter, although Mike Wrecka delved deeper into the navigation of one's life worth. Thus, exploring the experiences that life presents, but in a defeatist fashion due to the inherent wounds and obstacles it has given him. In terms of commonalities the rhyming was nothing too spectacular either. Anyways, my vote for Mike Wrecka. Thank you both.