Certain vs. MKG - Certain wins

BROKE LESNAR · 08-29-2014, 05:31 PM

MKG, I liked the direction you went with your concept, but the np/wp itself was too vague. Instead of going with the USC approach maybe you could have played off his name or the situation itself. I have no problem with you linking for context, I just thought when you said look dumber than him lying ab why you fell off, you used the USC np/wp to connect it and the USC connection was very generalized.

I liked Certain's MKG reference and np. It was a rocky delivery tho. I thought MKG did a much better job with his delivery and building up his concept. And idk if dyslex'd is a word lol.

v-Certain

08-29-2014, 05:31 PM	#5
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	MKG, I liked the direction you went with your concept, but the np/wp itself was too vague. Instead of going with the USC approach maybe you could have played off his name or the situation itself. I have no problem with you linking for context, I just thought when you said look dumber than him lying ab why you fell off, you used the USC np/wp to connect it and the USC connection was very generalized. I liked Certain's MKG reference and np. It was a rocky delivery tho. I thought MKG did a much better job with his delivery and building up his concept. And idk if dyslex'd is a word lol. v-Certain