Round 1: 10. Zen vs. R. Orc \\ Orc wins 5-0

CopyPat · 08-29-2014, 01:36 PM

when i first read zens i was like "Sick" great flow sick schemes. paranoid. yeah. then i read orc and he just crammed SO much more in his 10 lines. he matched zen flow wise which i didnt think would happen after reading his, and also just did more with the topic. took it a step further and was a bit less predictable with the story. also ending was dope about cheating and tying that into paranoid. good job both. but orc took this cause he just did more with it. zen was good but you coulda definitely made your lines longer and did a bit more with it

v-Orc

08-29-2014, 01:36 PM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	when i first read zens i was like "Sick" great flow sick schemes. paranoid. yeah. then i read orc and he just crammed SO much more in his 10 lines. he matched zen flow wise which i didnt think would happen after reading his, and also just did more with the topic. took it a step further and was a bit less predictable with the story. also ending was dope about cheating and tying that into paranoid. good job both. but orc took this cause he just did more with it. zen was good but you coulda definitely made your lines longer and did a bit more with it v-Orc __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.