Round 1: 12. UnbornBuddha vs. 5. Eŋg \\ Eŋg wins 5-0

Pinot Grij · 08-29-2014, 11:27 AM

UnbornBuddha's verse seemed like it had a bit of an identity crisis. Like it was being pulled into two different directions - pleasant and disturbing. Rhyming was a little spotty as well.

Eng seemed to outclass Unborn in terms of structure and the rhyming kept the pace going and made it a more entertaining piece. For the limited content, he really painted a full picture and captured a great deal of depth. I liked it immensely.

Vote for Eng for a more concise, polished effort.

08-29-2014, 11:27 AM	#4
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	UnbornBuddha's verse seemed like it had a bit of an identity crisis. Like it was being pulled into two different directions - pleasant and disturbing. Rhyming was a little spotty as well. Eng seemed to outclass Unborn in terms of structure and the rhyming kept the pace going and made it a more entertaining piece. For the limited content, he really painted a full picture and captured a great deal of depth. I liked it immensely. Vote for Eng for a more concise, polished effort. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.