AOWL Week 7: Kuja (2-3) vs. ZenLand (3-3) [ZENLAND WINS BY FORFEIT.]

Aesthetic · 03-31-2013, 09:06 PM

ZenLand

Dope wording I like how you setup the song aswell with the

"Obnoxious Dave. Stocked with rage loves nothin but blood gushin from mosh pits with blades
....And this is one of his positive days."

Really set's tone and the ending up for a like an story.

I like most of the song; Not many problems man keep it up. Simple read yet complex; Luvin ur shit.

Kuja

"Ill haunt people’s dreams, history’s greatest mystery
A great scar on mankind’s legacy from its darkest injury
People prevailed, bound together, they embraced"

God damn Kuja, you just scared the shit out of me with that verse..

Using a cereal killer's perspective to write art in a sick but beautiful way was one of the most talented schemes I seen in a long fucking time man...

Fuck, I dont wanna be on the niggas dick so I wont compliment an admire his verse as much as it deserves.

No fucking problems, near flawless.

V/Kuja, he blew out someone else's birthday candles..

Summary:

Straight up yall was neck and neck till about half way till Kuja's verse started to just like snap into it,
like you both setup the song's right.
Put em up sat em down with wording and climax tight.
Ending was both staggering and meaningful.

Idk how to not exxaggerate either one of your lyrics.

KEEEEPPP IT UPPP

03-31-2013, 09:06 PM	#8
Aesthetic Pimp Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: N/W Posts: 1,068 Battle Record: 1-12 Rep Power: 0	ZenLand Dope wording I like how you setup the song aswell with the "Obnoxious Dave. Stocked with rage loves nothin but blood gushin from mosh pits with blades ....And this is one of his positive days." Really set's tone and the ending up for a like an story. I like most of the song; Not many problems man keep it up. Simple read yet complex; Luvin ur shit. Kuja "Ill haunt people’s dreams, history’s greatest mystery A great scar on mankind’s legacy from its darkest injury People prevailed, bound together, they embraced" God damn Kuja, you just scared the shit out of me with that verse.. Using a cereal killer's perspective to write art in a sick but beautiful way was one of the most talented schemes I seen in a long fucking time man... Fuck, I dont wanna be on the niggas dick so I wont compliment an admire his verse as much as it deserves. No fucking problems, near flawless. V/Kuja, he blew out someone else's birthday candles.. Summary: Straight up yall was neck and neck till about half way till Kuja's verse started to just like snap into it, like you both setup the song's right. Put em up sat em down with wording and climax tight. Ending was both staggering and meaningful. Idk how to not exxaggerate either one of your lyrics. KEEEEPPP IT UPPP