Pumpkin Soup ft. Campbell

Malachi · 08-24-2014, 10:23 PM

CB:

my minds disturbed, i been giving guided tours of the expendable missions
describing iconic wars with tony starks iron arm and my mechanical pencil
the spars more hardcore than star wars in parkour, get my expanded edition
i sky walk a line of chalk over obi wans fighter squad, busting anakins pistol
my ramblings official, i'm doodling on this wack pad, yawning and burning jays
planned it so simple until i started drooling on dads dad, evolving herpes strain
i'm sick dogs, six pits all bloody with bit off muzzles and my wrist lost puddles
the big boss tough dude, jus jumping and pitching plays in this kickball huddle
jigsaws puzzle, my threads dead lames like stitches from kriss kross jumpsuits
hurling weight from earth to space, that's bricks of raw bundled on a lift off shuttle
on mars wit marvin the martian, harvesting piff, planning to capture klingon hustle
astronauts crashing blocks with galactic rocks that'll feed feigns for eons plus two
my whole team got eon flux moves, prowling on occasion for foulness from a faker
to think camps lyfzen shambles is a gamble and you lacking power of persuasion

M:

A juvenile sentenced to these sentences
Confined to this pen and shit,
Penmanship so decadent
This is heaven sent
Pennin shit hella dense with the elegance of elephants
This is excellence mixed wit a lil extra melanin
Houston, gotta represent the residence
It's evident that they improper like bent posture
Niggas is imposters, nigs deserve ten oscars
Our rosters dreaded like them rastas
Slaughtered authors and then prospered
Moe bars than Simpson cartoons
Words sharp as harpoons
Watch em Marvel like Tony Starks, Doom
Rock shows wit hot flows then I'm Ghost wit no boos like A.A rooms don't get confused
We bruise crews like titanic ships
Move yo boo's legs obtuse then we have to dip
No eclipse could block son shining like a diamond when pressures rising
Signing on the horizon
Lyin with lions
Droppin science faster than Ramadan
Tracks I been rhymin on got them at most fear in my atmosphere
Know my circle has no squares
Damage kicks and battle snares
Niggas want beef but I don't see no cattle here...
Thought provoking and steady provoking thots
So much dope quotes tell the fiends stop smoking rocks
Speechless I leave em wit these potent drops
Not talking like broken clocks
They hoping the flowing stops
Best stop the snoring
Me performing got producers mourning
Bout to start touring in lands that foreign
Shit already soaring over vets, but what you expect when Mal come next to Malcolm x and he ain't even dropped an album yet...

CopyPat · 08-24-2014, 10:50 PM

camp dopeness. you on that multi syllable shit which i love. good drop. wanna see u on a solo next time and really put your all into something. mal i started reading but didn't finish. shit was mundane bro, decadence elephant residence etc etc.. so boring. not trying to hate on you but that shit is played man. i honestly couldn't get past "This is excellence mixed wit a lil extra melanin", i couldn't do it.

DexLabb · 08-24-2014, 10:52 PM

malcom x line didnt make fuck all sense but you think ur cool for mentioning malcom x and rhyming a multi. shit faces for days

Malachi · 08-24-2014, 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

malcom x line didnt make fuck all sense but you think ur cool for mentioning malcom x and rhyming a multi. shit faces for days

Lol it's not worded well . I meant as how big his name is. Mentioned wit Him basically

Kin · 08-25-2014, 07:23 AM

camp-

the spars more hardcore than star wars in parkour, get my expanded edition
i sky walk a line of chalk over obi wans fighter squad, busting anakins pistol
haha dope right here

hurling weight from earth to space, that's bricks of raw bundled on a lift off shuttle
whoa-- stand out bar to me

the closer was nice too....been followin' a lil' of that so caught the name flipz..

solid verse impressed wit' the schemez u flipped

M-

Moe bars than Simpson cartoons
haha---neva seen that before....nice

I'm Ghost wit no boos like A.A rooms don't get confused
-thiz is ok

Not talking like broken clocks
-cleva' wit' those lil' short wordplayz my dude

the closer was Rugged too....great way to end thiz

diggin' the contrast of styles on thiz...both came with it

good shit

HoLLa

Malachi · 08-26-2014, 12:17 AM

Wird

e11even · 08-26-2014, 05:43 AM

Camp haven't really read you much but this was pretty dope. A few lines in the middle were kinda meh to me and the beginning was tight and the end line was ill. Good shit.
Mal your flow was an unwelcome fit at the start, but I quickly got into the first half. It fell off a bit a little past midway, but that last line was interesting... probably wudda been dope had it been better worded.

Good shit y'all.

Sho Money EMG · 08-26-2014, 12:34 PM

Dope shit Camp.

Loving the reference as well. Killed that shit.

Camp Bell · 08-26-2014, 04:58 PM

thanks for everyones view and feed.

yo malachi, i just read this. you did have some nice lines
but just keep working on your style. the structure was off
IMO. try writing line for line in a 1-2 style. i'm open for more
collabs or even if you need or want help, im here bro. keep
working and you'll find your niche.

DexLabb · 08-26-2014, 05:03 PM

shut the fuck up dude 1-2 style? ur lines are 30 syllables long and fucking retarted. ur boy did better than you. at least he didnt write a novel about a guy from sweden who went out picking mushrooms and ended up having magical buttsex with an elf

Split · 08-26-2014, 05:44 PM

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS

CHRONIC MASTURBATION

Sho Money EMG · 08-26-2014, 06:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

shut the fuck up dude 1-2 style? ur lines are 30 syllables long and fucking retarted. ur boy did better than you. at least he didnt write a novel about a guy from sweden who went out picking mushrooms and ended up having magical buttsex with an elf

Lmao. Dexx a str8 dickkkkheaadd.

08-24-2014, 10:23 PM	#1
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Pumpkin Soup ft. Campbell CB: my minds disturbed, i been giving guided tours of the expendable missions describing iconic wars with tony starks iron arm and my mechanical pencil the spars more hardcore than star wars in parkour, get my expanded edition i sky walk a line of chalk over obi wans fighter squad, busting anakins pistol my ramblings official, i'm doodling on this wack pad, yawning and burning jays planned it so simple until i started drooling on dads dad, evolving herpes strain i'm sick dogs, six pits all bloody with bit off muzzles and my wrist lost puddles the big boss tough dude, jus jumping and pitching plays in this kickball huddle jigsaws puzzle, my threads dead lames like stitches from kriss kross jumpsuits hurling weight from earth to space, that's bricks of raw bundled on a lift off shuttle on mars wit marvin the martian, harvesting piff, planning to capture klingon hustle astronauts crashing blocks with galactic rocks that'll feed feigns for eons plus two my whole team got eon flux moves, prowling on occasion for foulness from a faker to think camps lyfzen shambles is a gamble and you lacking power of persuasion M: A juvenile sentenced to these sentences Confined to this pen and shit, Penmanship so decadent This is heaven sent Pennin shit hella dense with the elegance of elephants This is excellence mixed wit a lil extra melanin Houston, gotta represent the residence It's evident that they improper like bent posture Niggas is imposters, nigs deserve ten oscars Our rosters dreaded like them rastas Slaughtered authors and then prospered Moe bars than Simpson cartoons Words sharp as harpoons Watch em Marvel like Tony Starks, Doom Rock shows wit hot flows then I'm Ghost wit no boos like A.A rooms don't get confused We bruise crews like titanic ships Move yo boo's legs obtuse then we have to dip No eclipse could block son shining like a diamond when pressures rising Signing on the horizon Lyin with lions Droppin science faster than Ramadan Tracks I been rhymin on got them at most fear in my atmosphere Know my circle has no squares Damage kicks and battle snares Niggas want beef but I don't see no cattle here... Thought provoking and steady provoking thots So much dope quotes tell the fiends stop smoking rocks Speechless I leave em wit these potent drops Not talking like broken clocks They hoping the flowing stops Best stop the snoring Me performing got producers mourning Bout to start touring in lands that foreign Shit already soaring over vets, but what you expect when Mal come next to Malcolm x and he ain't even dropped an album yet... __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

08-24-2014, 10:50 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	camp dopeness. you on that multi syllable shit which i love. good drop. wanna see u on a solo next time and really put your all into something. mal i started reading but didn't finish. shit was mundane bro, decadence elephant residence etc etc.. so boring. not trying to hate on you but that shit is played man. i honestly couldn't get past "This is excellence mixed wit a lil extra melanin", i couldn't do it. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-24-2014, 10:52 PM	#3
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	malcom x line didnt make fuck all sense but you think ur cool for mentioning malcom x and rhyming a multi. shit faces for days __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

08-26-2014, 12:17 AM	#6
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Wird __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

08-26-2014, 05:43 AM	#7
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	Camp haven't really read you much but this was pretty dope. A few lines in the middle were kinda meh to me and the beginning was tight and the end line was ill. Good shit. Mal your flow was an unwelcome fit at the start, but I quickly got into the first half. It fell off a bit a little past midway, but that last line was interesting... probably wudda been dope had it been better worded. Good shit y'all. __________________ Ahem.

08-25-2014, 07:23 AM	#5
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	camp- the spars more hardcore than star wars in parkour, get my expanded edition i sky walk a line of chalk over obi wans fighter squad, busting anakins pistol haha dope right here hurling weight from earth to space, that's bricks of raw bundled on a lift off shuttle whoa-- stand out bar to me the closer was nice too....been followin' a lil' of that so caught the name flipz.. solid verse impressed wit' the schemez u flipped M- Moe bars than Simpson cartoons haha---neva seen that before....nice I'm Ghost wit no boos like A.A rooms don't get confused -thiz is ok Not talking like broken clocks -cleva' wit' those lil' short wordplayz my dude the closer was Rugged too....great way to end thiz diggin' the contrast of styles on thiz...both came with it good shit HoLLa

08-26-2014, 12:34 PM	#8
Sho Money EMG Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Zooyork Posts: 2,124 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 0	Dope shit Camp. Loving the reference as well. Killed that shit. __________________ Sho Money \| Camp Bell Team Alpha EMG This site is whack

08-26-2014, 04:58 PM	#9
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	thanks for everyones view and feed. yo malachi, i just read this. you did have some nice lines but just keep working on your style. the structure was off IMO. try writing line for line in a 1-2 style. i'm open for more collabs or even if you need or want help, im here bro. keep working and you'll find your niche. __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-26-2014, 05:03 PM	#10
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	shut the fuck up dude 1-2 style? ur lines are 30 syllables long and fucking retarted. ur boy did better than you. at least he didnt write a novel about a guy from sweden who went out picking mushrooms and ended up having magical buttsex with an elf __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

08-26-2014, 05:44 PM	#11
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS CHRONIC MASTURBATION __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com