Semi Finals: Richard Schwartz vs. Purple Puke - [Schwartz advances 5-0 ]

Seymour BUTTS · 08-23-2014, 07:15 PM

Purple puke, solid writing bro. Honestly can say I was impressed. My qualm is that it was too predictable. Lacked that creative flair readers hunger for. Would've beaten most but Rich is a beast.

Rich, I'm gonna have to say verse of the tournament so far. I like this even more than temp's and gas' bombs in round 2. Wording, pace, cadence and atmosphere were all superb. Story was crafted disgustingly and the names were bonkers too. Thomas hinchcliffe - forever emblazoned as a Dickensian character in the halls of alias topical legend.

V/ Richard Schwartz

08-23-2014, 07:15 PM	#4
Seymour BUTTS Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 102 Rep Power: 0	Purple puke, solid writing bro. Honestly can say I was impressed. My qualm is that it was too predictable. Lacked that creative flair readers hunger for. Would've beaten most but Rich is a beast. Rich, I'm gonna have to say verse of the tournament so far. I like this even more than temp's and gas' bombs in round 2. Wording, pace, cadence and atmosphere were all superb. Story was crafted disgustingly and the names were bonkers too. Thomas hinchcliffe - forever emblazoned as a Dickensian character in the halls of alias topical legend. V/ Richard Schwartz