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Old 03-30-2013, 12:47 PM   #6
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Good vocab.. that's primarily my initial reaction.
Secondly I found a lot of this to be more like a rant of trying to cope with the turmoils of dealing with life and trying to blend in unnoticed, I can relate.. I remember a time when it seemed like all I could do to blend was get high and try to mellow out with the crowd surrounding me. It was til later in life I realized that the land of the free really meant that I could be whoeveer the fuck I wanted and not have to care what the fagot fucks around me thought about me. Its to bad @ the amount of people of really suffer from social anxieties and have to deal with medicating just to program themselves to fit according to the popular ways of the world. I think to truly be free and stand out all you have to do is say fuck the system and find your own way. Fitting in is what they want you to do. Standing out is dangerous.

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Geno you described how I saw the piece and you speak the truth man. I used to be the exact same throughout high school dropping pills, gettin drunk, smoking weed just to fit in. Basically being a follower of the crowd until one day I just fuck what's 'cool' I'm gonna be my motherfuckin self. I had to quote you on this one to say I just fuckin loved what you said right there man.

Ok sorry bout that lol. Xces as far as the piece goes the first thing I have to say which is what everyone else said and that's that you use excellent vocabulary. Your wordin is original and you have a unique way to say something simple but make it sound elegant. Props on that. As far as content goes I fuckin loved it but I'm guessin you saw what I said about Geno's post so you probably guessed that lol. Keep droppin man and check the AOWL out. I think you'd fare well there.
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