Quarter Final: Richard Schwartz vs. Template [RICHARD SCHWARTZ WINS 6-2]

SlutMachine · 08-17-2014, 11:40 PM

Richard Schwartz - Enjoyed the first verse quite a bit. Nice intro that flowed well along with a interesting concept.

''Hold up, I know what you’re thinking, so don’t try me
They already did that with ‘Outbreak’ back in the nineties
But they moved it from Africa to avoid black faces
And placed it in a little white suburb, now that’s racist''
^ Haha, not sure if I agree with it but cool shit nonetheless.

''See, we watch movies for escapism and that’s straight dumb
Cuz some people live in a world they actually have to escape from''
^ Well, we all need to escape reality now and then, it's what we do in the mean time that matters.

And yo, how come your movie doesn't bring forth the TISA and the privatizing everything bullshit? See, that shit needs to be adressed too because in the end that's what's going to kill most of us.

Template - Short but sweet, but would love to read more. The shit you went for was pretty cool despite how short it was and I enjoyed it for what it was, but ye, in the end I'd still like to read more.

Vote - Richard. If Template had written a piece long enough to really get into he might have snatched my vote, but I'd need more in a battle like this. Overall I felt Richard won this and that's what settled it for me.

08-17-2014, 11:40 PM	#1
SlutMachine Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	Richard Schwartz - Enjoyed the first verse quite a bit. Nice intro that flowed well along with a interesting concept. ''Hold up, I know what you’re thinking, so don’t try me They already did that with ‘Outbreak’ back in the nineties But they moved it from Africa to avoid black faces And placed it in a little white suburb, now that’s racist'' ^ Haha, not sure if I agree with it but cool shit nonetheless. ''See, we watch movies for escapism and that’s straight dumb Cuz some people live in a world they actually have to escape from'' ^ Well, we all need to escape reality now and then, it's what we do in the mean time that matters. And yo, how come your movie doesn't bring forth the TISA and the privatizing everything bullshit? See, that shit needs to be adressed too because in the end that's what's going to kill most of us. Template - Short but sweet, but would love to read more. The shit you went for was pretty cool despite how short it was and I enjoyed it for what it was, but ye, in the end I'd still like to read more. Vote - Richard. If Template had written a piece long enough to really get into he might have snatched my vote, but I'd need more in a battle like this. Overall I felt Richard won this and that's what settled it for me.