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Old 08-17-2014, 09:36 PM   #7
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So, I can only be honest. There isn't much I liked about either verse. I feel they both lacked a clear topic and focus, both lacked great rhymes (although one had a crazy scheme that I fully appreciated). I don't know though.

Voting piiz on the bases that his scheme was just awesome. That was the only stand out in this battle so....
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