Quarter Final: Piiz vs. Purple Puke [PURPLE PUKE ADVANCES 6-1]

Template · 08-17-2014, 01:09 AM

purple puke had some gewd descriptions like crimson dew sounds like a soda though but still coo. this would/could be better if two things 1 not so much exposition like I saw this and felt this and realized this and 2 if the verse focused more on the dying man and maybe ended with a realization or a stubbornness instead of we see him and he's already realized his folly. it was coo though, gewd verse and rhymes.

Piiz had cool rhymes 4sure and some interesting things to say like raping angels after they free him das not coo 2 do but coo 2 say. buuuuuuuut yeah I think this wasn't about anything really kinda just said a bunch of shit that rhymed and had a loose narrative attached so it was dope to read but dis iz topical tournament not hey check out this cool shit tournament.

vote purple puke

08-17-2014, 01:09 AM	#4
Template Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 52 Rep Power: 0	purple puke had some gewd descriptions like crimson dew sounds like a soda though but still coo. this would/could be better if two things 1 not so much exposition like I saw this and felt this and realized this and 2 if the verse focused more on the dying man and maybe ended with a realization or a stubbornness instead of we see him and he's already realized his folly. it was coo though, gewd verse and rhymes. Piiz had cool rhymes 4sure and some interesting things to say like raping angels after they free him das not coo 2 do but coo 2 say. buuuuuuuut yeah I think this wasn't about anything really kinda just said a bunch of shit that rhymed and had a loose narrative attached so it was dope to read but dis iz topical tournament not hey check out this cool shit tournament. vote purple puke