Wake Em Up Yung Gritty & Kin (AUDIO)

UnbornBuddha · 08-15-2014, 01:19 AM

This was of good quality. It had a raw gritty esque to it. Albeit, the lyrics could of been more intricate. Don't be afraid to be a full blown lyricist. I will say you were more on point than the first individual. You also have a good voice. But I do feel you can improve your presence by 1. make sure your lyrics are more powerful in terms of depth, content, and complexity. All the while remaining on tune with the melody at hand. I'm sure you can do it because you are talented. However, you are still not wielding the full capacity of your aptitude. You can still sound good even while exposing your knack for rap's inner science, which is just a term to denote the lyrical prowess one can explore.
Thank you for the chance to listen. Keep making tracks, and I'll gladly give my input if you bless and allow me with the opportunity.

08-15-2014, 01:19 AM	#3
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	This was of good quality. It had a raw gritty esque to it. Albeit, the lyrics could of been more intricate. Don't be afraid to be a full blown lyricist. I will say you were more on point than the first individual. You also have a good voice. But I do feel you can improve your presence by 1. make sure your lyrics are more powerful in terms of depth, content, and complexity. All the while remaining on tune with the melody at hand. I'm sure you can do it because you are talented. However, you are still not wielding the full capacity of your aptitude. You can still sound good even while exposing your knack for rap's inner science, which is just a term to denote the lyrical prowess one can explore. Thank you for the chance to listen. Keep making tracks, and I'll gladly give my input if you bless and allow me with the opportunity.