Soapbox Paradox

sral · 08-13-2014, 06:37 AM

Wickerman line was dope, I love that movie. (The original, not the Nicholas Lame shitmake)

Your topical style actually reminds me a lot of @ill nik-A, I don't know if you've read much by him but almost everything from the rhyme scheme jumping around to the 'scatterbrained' type writing where one thought jumps to another etc - It's real reminiscent, to me at least, and I've known of nik-A for a decade or more.

There's great wording in parts right through this, ala @dead man at points with your turn of phrase. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for feeding my drop.

Keep that pen moving!

08-13-2014, 06:37 AM	#10
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,608 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Wickerman line was dope, I love that movie. (The original, not the Nicholas Lame shitmake) Your topical style actually reminds me a lot of @ill nik-A, I don't know if you've read much by him but almost everything from the rhyme scheme jumping around to the 'scatterbrained' type writing where one thought jumps to another etc - It's real reminiscent, to me at least, and I've known of nik-A for a decade or more. There's great wording in parts right through this, ala @dead man at points with your turn of phrase. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for feeding my drop. Keep that pen moving!