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08-11-2014, 09:31 PM
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This was all types of awful - if you're gonna do the stream of consciousness style, you gotta incorporate more rhyming - if you're not going to bother having a story or theme, then at least impress me with your technicality. This is sophomoric tripe, try harder next time.
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