Cool analysis into denial fueled neurotic behavior

NYCSPITZ · 08-10-2014, 12:48 PM

By Template from alias tourney: ( this is how I view hush and beyond tbh)

Text god. My desktop documents are bloated with concepts
punchlines. ways to call you a faggot that nobody’s thought yet
a boss vet, accomplishment list reads like sermons from Jesus
on any site, champed every major league, tourney and season
I’m that squeezed tourniquet feeling for all of my adversaries
against me? anything less than your A-game’ll get you aptly buried
the best from any era, catching bodies consistently
from new jacks to elite cats, a single vote is a moral victory

I’m dope

and while over the years my peers had enough of the same
I do this shit for no other reason but the love of the game

but here I am, quarterfinals of another humdrum tournament
pitted against a hungry unknown determined to earn a win
I’ll learn this kid. just a quick google search of his government name
but wait - he made a thread that exposed him as a wonderful lame

“my aunt died of cancer last night” I can’t believe this shit!
did this kid really just reveal a set of personal weaknesses?
I’ve never been so happy to hear of cancer or death
now watch tha gawd work in mysterious ways to damage your rep

“I cried so much when I heard, and it hurts to admit,
I’m fighting tears while I type this” you should’ve fought the urge to submit
"it’s been so hard since my parents divorced a few months ago”
go on, keep typing, I can start to feel my punches flow
“my younger sister started cutting - does anything really matter?”
I appreciate you handing me so much ammo on a silver platter!

“I just, I don’t know, I'm so alone, so fucking helpless
I’ve thought of killing myself forreal but I feel like that’s just selfish
so I logged on to vent, I’m sorry, I don’t have a fuckin clue
I don’t have anyone to talk to. I don’t know what to do."

…

fuck.

in the thread it's a mix of “I’m sorry, that’s awful dawg”
and “tell that bitch to stop being dramatic and walk it off"
my godly jots don’t feel so awesome, this shit’s a cry for help
even though it makes for a great haymaker - he’s actually by himself
I kinda feel bad for the guy. he needs comfort, solace
then again, we all got problems, most don’t make it public knowledge
what if these punches cause him to off himself? at this point it seems likely
would it fuck with my conscience? what if he’s trolling? shit, I think he might be
nah I don’t know though, that rant sounded legitimate
what the fuck? since when do I care? what is this shit?!
a random username on an internet forum, that’s all he is
fuck his aunt, fuck his family, fuck him if he doesn’t have the balls to live
this is a message board, not real life, if you can’t handle that you’re hopeless dude
they’re just words - I’m not responsible if you fuck around and get emotional
say it again
THIS ISN'T REAL LIFE YOU FUCKING SCALY FAGGOT VIRGIN
THIS ISN'T REAL LIFE, YOU ARE NOT A REAL PERSON

exhale

that was close, I almost lost it, back to handling this wack nerd
I replied “I bet that whore was a pisces she’s so compatible with cancer”

THA GAWD IS BACK

@Hush @Beyond

gaseous snake · 08-10-2014, 12:51 PM

That was a really good verse.

NYCSPITZ · 08-10-2014, 12:53 PM

Word this and yours was top notch from round 2...

gotta step my game UP if I level to rd 3...................

Pharaohs Army · 08-10-2014, 05:27 PM

i am very entertained by this. nice job.
wait did you actually use this in a tourney or somethin?

Template · 08-10-2014, 10:33 PM

Oh how nice :)

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=87992

:)

REAL LIFE · 08-11-2014, 09:49 AM

RETURN TO ME. THIS IS NOT REAL. LOG OFF.

Certain · 08-11-2014, 11:13 AM

@Agathocles the GOOD, I feel like it's time to go back to @NYCSPITZ.

NYCSPITZ · 08-11-2014, 11:48 AM

yeah me too, do it

big baby · 08-11-2014, 02:49 PM

I'd fucking murk this nigga

Hush · 08-17-2014, 09:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by REAL LIFE

RETURN TO ME. THIS IS NOT REAL. LOG OFF.

YDK · 08-17-2014, 01:54 PM

Lmao this was dope

Ghost1 · 08-17-2014, 03:52 PM

Reads like pinot grij or certain

Grqnted i dont follow certain much or other topical writers this coukd be

But ive read stuff from the 2 above mentioned wrifers that reminded me of the op

Cool verse

08-10-2014, 12:48 PM	#1
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Cool analysis into denial fueled neurotic behavior By Template from alias tourney: ( this is how I view hush and beyond tbh) Text god. My desktop documents are bloated with concepts punchlines. ways to call you a faggot that nobody’s thought yet a boss vet, accomplishment list reads like sermons from Jesus on any site, champed every major league, tourney and season I’m that squeezed tourniquet feeling for all of my adversaries against me? anything less than your A-game’ll get you aptly buried the best from any era, catching bodies consistently from new jacks to elite cats, a single vote is a moral victory I’m dope and while over the years my peers had enough of the same I do this shit for no other reason but the love of the game but here I am, quarterfinals of another humdrum tournament pitted against a hungry unknown determined to earn a win I’ll learn this kid. just a quick google search of his government name but wait - he made a thread that exposed him as a wonderful lame “my aunt died of cancer last night” I can’t believe this shit! did this kid really just reveal a set of personal weaknesses? I’ve never been so happy to hear of cancer or death now watch tha gawd work in mysterious ways to damage your rep “I cried so much when I heard, and it hurts to admit, I’m fighting tears while I type this” you should’ve fought the urge to submit "it’s been so hard since my parents divorced a few months ago” go on, keep typing, I can start to feel my punches flow “my younger sister started cutting - does anything really matter?” I appreciate you handing me so much ammo on a silver platter! “I just, I don’t know, I'm so alone, so fucking helpless I’ve thought of killing myself forreal but I feel like that’s just selfish so I logged on to vent, I’m sorry, I don’t have a fuckin clue I don’t have anyone to talk to. I don’t know what to do." … fuck. in the thread it's a mix of “I’m sorry, that’s awful dawg” and “tell that bitch to stop being dramatic and walk it off" my godly jots don’t feel so awesome, this shit’s a cry for help even though it makes for a great haymaker - he’s actually by himself I kinda feel bad for the guy. he needs comfort, solace then again, we all got problems, most don’t make it public knowledge what if these punches cause him to off himself? at this point it seems likely would it fuck with my conscience? what if he’s trolling? shit, I think he might be nah I don’t know though, that rant sounded legitimate what the fuck? since when do I care? what is this shit?! a random username on an internet forum, that’s all he is fuck his aunt, fuck his family, fuck him if he doesn’t have the balls to live this is a message board, not real life, if you can’t handle that you’re hopeless dude they’re just words - I’m not responsible if you fuck around and get emotional say it again THIS ISN'T REAL LIFE YOU FUCKING SCALY FAGGOT VIRGIN THIS ISN'T REAL LIFE, YOU ARE NOT A REAL PERSON exhale that was close, I almost lost it, back to handling this wack nerd I replied “I bet that whore was a pisces she’s so compatible with cancer” THA GAWD IS BACK @Hush @Beyond __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

08-10-2014, 12:53 PM	#3
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Word this and yours was top notch from round 2... gotta step my game UP if I level to rd 3................... __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

08-11-2014, 09:49 AM	#6
REAL LIFE Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 171 Rep Power: 0	RETURN TO ME. THIS IS NOT REAL. LOG OFF. __________________ REMEMBER ME?

08-11-2014, 11:13 AM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	@Agathocles the GOOD, I feel like it's time to go back to @NYCSPITZ. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-11-2014, 11:48 AM	#8
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	yeah me too, do it __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

08-10-2014, 12:51 PM	#2
gaseous snake Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 17 Rep Power: 0	That was a really good verse.

08-10-2014, 05:27 PM	#4
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	i am very entertained by this. nice job. wait did you actually use this in a tourney or somethin?

08-10-2014, 10:33 PM	#5
Template Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 52 Rep Power: 0	Oh how nice :) http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=87992 :)

08-17-2014, 01:54 PM	#11
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Lmao this was dope __________________