R2: Jhene Aiko vs. Purple Puke - [Purple Puke advances 6-4]

Richard Schwartz · 08-10-2014, 12:05 PM

Puke - verse got off to a rocky start. Once you settled into the story like 5 lines in, it got entertaining. Every couplet was pretty fresh. Overall though the verse felt a little hurried but I enjoyed what was there. Very cool concept.

Jenny - I didn't really like your approach. The comparison between the war battlefield and love as a battlefield was tenuous and awkward. I'm sorry, but I was cringing through the whole thing. Duchess exploding, full frontal, pounded your ass. It was just strange bro. I couldn't get on board.

Puke's verse was brief and frustrating because it had potential. Jenny's verse was structured and fleshed out but I found it awkward and creepy.

Vote - purple puke

08-10-2014, 12:05 PM	#1
Richard Schwartz Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 65 Rep Power: 3707157	Puke - verse got off to a rocky start. Once you settled into the story like 5 lines in, it got entertaining. Every couplet was pretty fresh. Overall though the verse felt a little hurried but I enjoyed what was there. Very cool concept. Jenny - I didn't really like your approach. The comparison between the war battlefield and love as a battlefield was tenuous and awkward. I'm sorry, but I was cringing through the whole thing. Duchess exploding, full frontal, pounded your ass. It was just strange bro. I couldn't get on board. Puke's verse was brief and frustrating because it had potential. Jenny's verse was structured and fleshed out but I found it awkward and creepy. Vote - purple puke