R2: Gaseous Snake vs. Wolfdick - [Gaseous Snakes Advances 8-1]

Template · 08-10-2014, 06:31 AM

gas snake is very gewd here. impressive verse. I have nothing bad to say about it so maybe I'll just guess who you are, and if I do then you get kicked out of tourney for not having an alias and I champ easier. no maybe not. ok then. I think you used a relevant example to discuss the relationship between ignorance and fear, citing a fundamental paradox that we're afraid of being ignorant (or being seen as ignorant at least), only to pursue ignorance to quell our fears. technology and the internet and hiding behind google to make us look smart etc etc was all perfect really, fuck off. honestly best verse of the tourney so far, first two stanzas are HOF.

wolf dick ok name kinda sophomoric like "OMG HE ATE SOMEONE'S JIZZ!" obnoxious american pie humour but hey we all laughed at that shit at one point can't judge you. your verse gets approval, hey mikey! I like it. good rhyming and run ons and cool images and shit, like the bee being the pollen's muse, most poetic thing ever from someone with the moniker wolfdick, I guarantee that. the driving force of this verse being the ignorance is bliss arbitrarily spattered across the rhymes was meh to me tbh. kinda cliche, and even though your verse was dopely rhymed and written, it didn't shed any new angle on ignorance is bliss, which kinda hit your verse in the nuts a little, enough to let gas snake build a better lead while yours recovered on one knee

vote gas snake

08-10-2014, 06:31 AM	#7
Template Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 52 Rep Power: 0	gas snake is very gewd here. impressive verse. I have nothing bad to say about it so maybe I'll just guess who you are, and if I do then you get kicked out of tourney for not having an alias and I champ easier. no maybe not. ok then. I think you used a relevant example to discuss the relationship between ignorance and fear, citing a fundamental paradox that we're afraid of being ignorant (or being seen as ignorant at least), only to pursue ignorance to quell our fears. technology and the internet and hiding behind google to make us look smart etc etc was all perfect really, fuck off. honestly best verse of the tourney so far, first two stanzas are HOF. wolf dick ok name kinda sophomoric like "OMG HE ATE SOMEONE'S JIZZ!" obnoxious american pie humour but hey we all laughed at that shit at one point can't judge you. your verse gets approval, hey mikey! I like it. good rhyming and run ons and cool images and shit, like the bee being the pollen's muse, most poetic thing ever from someone with the moniker wolfdick, I guarantee that. the driving force of this verse being the ignorance is bliss arbitrarily spattered across the rhymes was meh to me tbh. kinda cliche, and even though your verse was dopely rhymed and written, it didn't shed any new angle on ignorance is bliss, which kinda hit your verse in the nuts a little, enough to let gas snake build a better lead while yours recovered on one knee vote gas snake