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Old 08-08-2014, 02:53 PM   #1
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It's hard to accept death. It's even harder to accept life. We neglect living because we're dead inside. Walk around dreaming. Think we're so clever. No pleasure for the pest with mind. Nature's blunder. The deceptive kind. We warp our memories to fit our image of who we are. We're all legends inside. Look around for meaning with desperate eyes. We'll sleep when we're dead because rest is a vice. Stick lead in our spine to get through to our thick heads that we're dying.

this is pretty much the summary of the whole thing and was the brightest spot for me. so emo lol.

Sometimes I'm jealous of those who thrive in a cage. Wish I could sit idle while my life slips away. Update my Facebook for my need of praise. Instagram my selfie, #smilieface:). Watch me. Love me. You guys are great! Listen to beats by Dre while I see whose liked my page.

this was pretty cool to cage is pretty cool metaphor for instagram and all of that, word.
the way you kind of wrote this took the tone of someone thinking out loud about all these emotions from remembering the ex which is pretty cool, not many people can get into that mindframe and project it onto paper. Nice Job you two.

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