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03-28-2013, 04:07 PM
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Usually with the rhyme scheme set up the way it is with the long bar length and the internal rhyming it would be hard to find a steady flow...but It was pretty smooth to say the least. Some parts were a bit rough but besides that I enjoyed this whole piece. The concept was cool and I loved the raw attitude this rhyme gave off. It fit the concept pretty well. i liked the sloth line.
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