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08-06-2014, 12:37 AM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Now he roams the restless ‘Handle, he won’t rest til they’re dead
As he paints the West in red, in search of Texas revenge ^Tight. It wasn't the most thorough effort, Mr. Schwartz but it was solid writing. You seem like you have the instincts to be able to make a longer piece and really hammer home a memorable story. This one felt like more of a snippet or a synopsis - all verses are, really, compared to short stories, but that's what makes it an artful process. Keep doing you |
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