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08-05-2014, 05:04 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2014
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one take for me.
Never happens. translation.. impeccable rhythm.. you split the lines and punctuation up excellently. i had to "read" it again to glean the content/message.. "kids these days" would not garner "what it's saying", from "1 or 2 listens"... don't know if that's a bad thing.. but it's my FB, and since it's admirably artistic no one should expect that anyway. |
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