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Old 07-30-2014, 03:53 PM   #1
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listen chico, I'm old and losing hair, but it's u who needs to quit
so please forgive my New York lisp when I say that alopecia shit
Oh shit wow. U never write ur own lines. Did u forget how?
SIT DOWN. Hush been writin bars for u so long u actually think your him now
Tho i kno U'll give everything u got cuz how cheap ur life is
..But even if you leave EVERYTHING on the line youd prolly ask ME to write it
U get worse per season, Beyond must be cursed by jesus
Cuz In SC5 it took an act of god......of war writing 80% of ur verse to beat him
So of course ur tri-force......lets narrow ur lane right down
u triangles that got stolen from a legend ...TRUST we all kno ur games by now
Who hasnt handed u raps? You got no standards or class?
Bitch U got so many ghost writers you could give a Ouija Board a panic attack
Writing aside he pms me for votes too! ....That shits crazy
I been votin 4 this faggot who gets fucked in the ass way b4 gamble vs big baby
& u cant ghost or vote MY shit...every1 takes u for a lame.
So u wanna go out on a limb for me? GOOD...... lemme just break ur fuckin leg
I kno....imma cold savage....but des....u 54 an only average
U drown urself in aqua velva ....a sea critic told me....U SMELL LIKE OLD FAGGIT
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Old 07-31-2014, 05:57 AM   #2
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des is a man to fear, cuz all my stanzas sear
if bags bring heat to a bar, it's a flaming cheeto lost in his ratty beard
it's not just u, I'm also fucking w/ ur family while I'm killin ya
if ur sister's a saint, it's her stage name and it's preceded by Silvia
u have no chance in the tag shit, someone make this fag quit...
funny how u pic nik, but I'm not sure he really wants Ant in his basket
admit it. it's time to start that diet, u human whale
I put my sandwiches in bags - it looks like a lot of other people do as well
nah, I know u get pussy, but ur bitch at the club? you'll never bring her
cuz ur known to fuck more retarded bitches than Johnny Knoxville in the Ringer
des is mad rich, I got back problems cause my wallet is fat bitch
meanwhile it's ironic as fuck how bags don't have paper OR plastic

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Oh shit wow. U never write ur own lines. Did u forget how?
SIT DOWN. Hush been writin bars for u so long u actually think your him now
Tho i kno U'll give everything u got cuz how cheap ur life is
..But even if you leave EVERYTHING on the line youd prolly ask ME to write it
U get worse per season, Beyond must be cursed by jesus
Cuz In SC5 it took an act of god......of war writing 80% of ur verse to beat him
Who hasnt handed u raps? You got no standards or class?
Bitch U got so many ghost writers you could give a Ouija Board a panic attack
Writing aside he pms me for votes too! ....That shits crazy
I been votin 4 this faggot who gets fucked in the ass way b4 gamble vs big baby


Okay so I have this scored 6-5 Des, but I think I might have fucked my math up bc that can't be right. Let me reread both verses real quick. Okay so I have this scored 8-1 Bags. Great battle guys.








Lmao jk. I really thought Des did a pretty good job of being consistent. It helped protect his weaknesses bc although most of the material I wouldn't call haymakers, they were funny and a steady mixture of decent flips. I would have quoted the alone line despite the wp prolly being used before. I loved the concept and the build. The problem was that the abrupt ending with just ouch really took the momentum out of it.



Bags first 6 bars, with the exception of the triforce one, were terrific 4th wall personals. Very rapid paced and fierce. The triforce bar kind of interrupted the entire segment, but it was a nice run. Good theme throughout with the ghostwriting. The final 2 bars didn't have as big an effect on me as the aforementioned, so they really hindered the conclusion of the verse.

I would say LOTB goes to Bags for the Ouija Board bar, I also enjoyed the everything on the line bar alot. Des' best bars were Silvia Saint and the paper or plastic flip. Fresh new spin on an obviously redundant np. But I've been gone for awhile so it might not be that fresh to others. Also liked the flaming cheetos line.

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Old 07-31-2014, 12:17 PM   #3
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des is a man to fear, cuz all my stanzas sear
if bags bring heat to a bar, it's a flaming cheeto lost in his ratty beard
u have no chance in the tag shit, someone make this fag quit...
funny how u pic nik, but I'm not sure he really wants Ant in his basket
don't quit ur desk job, ur two payments away from owning ur couch
it's easy to set people up for 'a loan,' when that's how u will always be... ouch
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Oh shit wow. U never write ur own lines. Did u forget how?
SIT DOWN. Hush been writin bars for u so long u actually think your him now
U get worse per season, Beyond must be cursed by jesus
Cuz In SC5 it took an act of god......of war writing 80% of ur verse to beat him
Who hasnt handed u raps? You got no standards or class?
Bitch U got so many ghost writers you could give a Ouija Board a panic attack
Another close ass battle. Locked with quotes, but I think Bags had LOTB with the Ouija Board line which was DOPE imo. Des you had the Ratty Beard which was lol & 'a loan' was alright for the personal, but it was just too easy. Picnic was cool too. Bags had Ouiji / GOW which were the 2 strongest for me. Great battle, but I have to edge it to Bags with the harder punches.

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