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Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 26,334
Battle Record: 0-1
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SIT DOWN. Hush been writin bars for u so long u actually think your him now Tho i kno U'll give everything u got cuz how cheap ur life is ..But even if you leave EVERYTHING on the line youd prolly ask ME to write it U get worse per season, Beyond must be cursed by jesus Cuz In SC5 it took an act of god......of war writing 80% of ur verse to beat him So of course ur tri-force......lets narrow ur lane right down u triangles that got stolen from a legend ...TRUST we all kno ur games by now Who hasnt handed u raps? You got no standards or class? Bitch U got so many ghost writers you could give a Ouija Board a panic attack Writing aside he pms me for votes too! ....That shits crazy I been votin 4 this faggot who gets fucked in the ass way b4 gamble vs big baby & u cant ghost or vote MY shit...every1 takes u for a lame. So u wanna go out on a limb for me? GOOD...... lemme just break ur fuckin leg I kno....imma cold savage....but des....u 54 an only average U drown urself in aqua velva ....a sea critic told me....U SMELL LIKE OLD FAGGIT |
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 2,245
Battle Record: 9-4
Champed - 1-2 Punch League
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Okay so I have this scored 6-5 Des, but I think I might have fucked my math up bc that can't be right. Let me reread both verses real quick. Okay so I have this scored 8-1 Bags. Great battle guys. Lmao jk. I really thought Des did a pretty good job of being consistent. It helped protect his weaknesses bc although most of the material I wouldn't call haymakers, they were funny and a steady mixture of decent flips. I would have quoted the alone line despite the wp prolly being used before. I loved the concept and the build. The problem was that the abrupt ending with just ouch really took the momentum out of it. Bags first 6 bars, with the exception of the triforce one, were terrific 4th wall personals. Very rapid paced and fierce. The triforce bar kind of interrupted the entire segment, but it was a nice run. Good theme throughout with the ghostwriting. The final 2 bars didn't have as big an effect on me as the aforementioned, so they really hindered the conclusion of the verse. I would say LOTB goes to Bags for the Ouija Board bar, I also enjoyed the everything on the line bar alot. Des' best bars were Silvia Saint and the paper or plastic flip. Fresh new spin on an obviously redundant np. But I've been gone for awhile so it might not be that fresh to others. Also liked the flaming cheetos line. v-Des |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,509
Battle Record: 51-29
Champed - Newbie Tourney VII
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V/ Bags |
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