ill nik-A [VS] Orc [ill nik-A WINS]

Certain · 07-30-2014, 01:10 PM

I must agree with Hush. This was the strongest showing of the tournament thus far, which is no surprise.

ill nik-A: Your biggest hits were the beard evolution line and the pink poncho line, but most of your verse connected. The duck line would've been a standout had he been making a duck face. The thighs line similarly didn't work because that's not happening in the photo. I found your setups formulaic and often a bit lame, but most are. This verse was strong.

Orc: No one told you to stop capitalizing your concepts? The hint of gray and 23 lines were your best, but you also had no major misses. The Terminator line was weak, and the Fosters line was worded poorly. You used "wow" to start two of your first three punches. I think what costs you this very close battle is your last handful of lines. You weren't as harsh as ill nik-A and ended weakly.

Vote: ill nik-A

07-30-2014, 01:10 PM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I must agree with Hush. This was the strongest showing of the tournament thus far, which is no surprise. ill nik-A: Your biggest hits were the beard evolution line and the pink poncho line, but most of your verse connected. The duck line would've been a standout had he been making a duck face. The thighs line similarly didn't work because that's not happening in the photo. I found your setups formulaic and often a bit lame, but most are. This verse was strong. Orc: No one told you to stop capitalizing your concepts? The hint of gray and 23 lines were your best, but you also had no major misses. The Terminator line was weak, and the Fosters line was worded poorly. You used "wow" to start two of your first three punches. I think what costs you this very close battle is your last handful of lines. You weren't as harsh as ill nik-A and ended weakly. Vote: ill nik-A