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07-30-2014, 07:37 AM
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low tide in serotonin bay
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This is awesome, from top to bottom. You destroyed every rhyme scheme in this withour straying from the subject. It was dope, relatable, lyrical...the imagery sold me too. This could really be an anthem for a lot of us that can't seem to get our lives together, I definetly relate. Kinda reminded me of 'Rock Bottom' by Eminem. Really dope my dude hope to see more.
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