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It started a little slow, but once you started going it turns to a nice tune. Also your flow & voice seems to change sporadically at times this changes the pacing a bit that I believe shifts the rhythm that your intending to convey. As for the singing of your choruses, this is a good thing to do, and I believe makes songs a more palatable. But if you are going to venture into this area I suggest you improve your vocals.
The beat is very enjoyable. It has this ethereal feel to it. Anyways, keep making your music and spreading it. Follow your dreams. |
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