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Old 07-27-2014, 03:30 PM   #1
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I really enjoyed the crazy structure at the beginning, and i enjoyed right after the dream for a while, when it got to the rape or w/e it went downhill pretty fast. Your imagery was good in the dream, and after the dream for a while. the rhyme scheme was weird but worked well for me.
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