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fuck off kid, nobody here ccould slightly tweak their shit to be accepted by mainstream. thats a laugh out loud joke
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07-24-2014, 09:57 PM
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u write me a rap that a fat girl at macys would jiggle around to, while singing all the words to while looking at shirts and we can talk
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07-24-2014, 10:06 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Fat girls don't want someone to write them a rap they can sing at Macy's.
Buy that girl a chicken wrap though... |
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@Zen I'll actually feed this tomorrow
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
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- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
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- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
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- never lost game of hide and seek
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07-27-2014, 08:36 PM
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07-27-2014, 08:53 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2014
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Let me.put my.2 centz into tha drama 1st...
This is called open mic...any type of writtenz/recordingz belong here there is no intended audience Personally id rather have 1 hip hop head ynderstanding everything I spit then 100 just listening not getting the conceptz On to zen... Ive neva seen ,"walkin a sociopath" flipped... crazy An the matress over look the matress over line was fire Like the deepness behind what u write here as alwayz HoLLa |
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07-27-2014, 09:15 PM
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All dope. What made this powerful was that it had a lot of truth to it, and the nuances of your experience that all of us go through are forgotten as we are healed by time and space from those we miss. Very good wording throughout, would say great but there were a couple places where you forced a phrase or something. Really thought the imagery was well above par for the OM. Good job Zen man. Not directionless/ random at all
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