Round One: Seymour Butts vs. SlutMachine [Both advance]

Adonis · 07-25-2014, 01:33 AM

Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck

@Seymour BUTTS @SlutMachine

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SlutMachine · 07-31-2014, 10:19 PM

The brush that paints the image of afterlife
isn't the mastermind if he died and was brought back alive.
It's just a simple thought of deceased hypocrisy.
Fuck the prophecy. Honestly;
St.Peter is just the receptionist that hates democracy,
and no-one truly gets the policy.
So much for being free for kids and burden,
all I did was reading the Bible in between sips of bourbon.
Now I'm certain that our fate was sealed before the apple,
and the tree of religion fed on prototypes praised by the chapel.

God taught me to never trust an investor for prosperity,
he put his trust in me so the settlement wasn't concerning me.
Now I'm in solitary confinement for eternity,
far away from the bible studies fraternity...
Hell isn't how you envision it
with demons guarding your imprisonment,
bombarding the last bits of your soul
taking the toll for paying your bad decisions rent.
Hell is loneliness with nothing to see and no-one to preach,
no-one to lead, and all of your goals is slightly out of reach.

I realized the seven sins found its roots in religious beliefs,
at least wrath, pride, sloth and gluttony is common in these.
We tribute wrath for the fury God sends upon those who doesn't believe,
Pride is for his followers that looks down on those who's destined to leave.
Sloth for the fact that Heaven's within reach if you just know how to read,
Gluttony for blindly swallowing the ''truths'' about Adam and Eve.
Greed is for priests that strive to be closer to God with intentions to lead,
Lust for consuming the body of Christ where priests gives you his body to eat.
Envy is covered for those who lack all of these... And I was doomed as a heathen,
now rotting away without resent in the garden of Eden.

Seymour BUTTS · 08-01-2014, 11:38 AM

He's just a morbid soul rocking murderous roots,
class-A cadet, fiend with a perfect salute
Strongest man of the year and his schoolwork is astute
blueprints for advanced drones - he's earning his soup.
Fresh outta West Point: yo, now he's purchasing troops
Vice-Prez, the firm's mercenaries carnage and loot
wading typhoons galore in his barnacle boots
--Promise the third world gold great while starving their youth
Genius noted for speaking acumen and articles too
An Economic Hitman. Sinister with his carnival crew
Oil magnates? Kidnap kids and tarnish their youth
Presidential handshake, framed. He varnished it blue
Million dollar Smile, American commando genius
in an instant he'll -
morph an inferno of sick thoughts into a candle's feeblest.
The self-discipline of a SEAL, this soul mutilated beast is breathin
with steady focus...but his control's just East of Eden.
Established bases in Western Europe from Crete to Sweden,
Dominated economies and people after the war...
imploding enemies from within - he even peopled their corps
The leader of his gang; ostensibly gleeful, adored
...but karma brings the drowned truth of his evils to shore
tapestries woven with splendor and deceit for senor -
a tapestry woven that suffocates his sleep when he snores.
Prostitutes and penthouse homes, but business is lord...
He flew to Rio once to bust in some Brazilian whores
then walked through favelas with an awesome grimaced remorse
...shot dead in the slums -
a price to pay for shunning the wisdom of source.

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King Ra. · 08-02-2014, 10:26 AM

I appreciate both of you dropping. Both of you advance.

07-25-2014, 01:33 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Round One: Seymour Butts vs. SlutMachine [Both advance] Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions. Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors. Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK . View Other Rules Here Goodluck @Seymour BUTTS @SlutMachine Topic: __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-31-2014, 10:19 PM	#2
SlutMachine Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	Damned if you do, doomed if you don't. The brush that paints the image of afterlife isn't the mastermind if he died and was brought back alive. It's just a simple thought of deceased hypocrisy. Fuck the prophecy. Honestly; St.Peter is just the receptionist that hates democracy, and no-one truly gets the policy. So much for being free for kids and burden, all I did was reading the Bible in between sips of bourbon. Now I'm certain that our fate was sealed before the apple, and the tree of religion fed on prototypes praised by the chapel. God taught me to never trust an investor for prosperity, he put his trust in me so the settlement wasn't concerning me. Now I'm in solitary confinement for eternity, far away from the bible studies fraternity... Hell isn't how you envision it with demons guarding your imprisonment, bombarding the last bits of your soul taking the toll for paying your bad decisions rent. Hell is loneliness with nothing to see and no-one to preach, no-one to lead, and all of your goals is slightly out of reach. I realized the seven sins found its roots in religious beliefs, at least wrath, pride, sloth and gluttony is common in these. We tribute wrath for the fury God sends upon those who doesn't believe, Pride is for his followers that looks down on those who's destined to leave. Sloth for the fact that Heaven's within reach if you just know how to read, Gluttony for blindly swallowing the ''truths'' about Adam and Eve. Greed is for priests that strive to be closer to God with intentions to lead, Lust for consuming the body of Christ where priests gives you his body to eat. Envy is covered for those who lack all of these... And I was doomed as a heathen, now rotting away without resent in the garden of Eden. Last edited by SlutMachine; 07-31-2014 at 10:23 PM.

08-01-2014, 11:38 AM	#3
Seymour BUTTS Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 102 Rep Power: 0	He's just a morbid soul rocking murderous roots, class-A cadet, fiend with a perfect salute Strongest man of the year and his schoolwork is astute blueprints for advanced drones - he's earning his soup. Fresh outta West Point: yo, now he's purchasing troops Vice-Prez, the firm's mercenaries carnage and loot wading typhoons galore in his barnacle boots --Promise the third world gold great while starving their youth Genius noted for speaking acumen and articles too An Economic Hitman. Sinister with his carnival crew Oil magnates? Kidnap kids and tarnish their youth Presidential handshake, framed. He varnished it blue Million dollar Smile, American commando genius in an instant he'll - morph an inferno of sick thoughts into a candle's feeblest. The self-discipline of a SEAL, this soul mutilated beast is breathin with steady focus...but his control's just East of Eden. Established bases in Western Europe from Crete to Sweden, Dominated economies and people after the war... imploding enemies from within - he even peopled their corps The leader of his gang; ostensibly gleeful, adored ...but karma brings the drowned truth of his evils to shore tapestries woven with splendor and deceit for senor - a tapestry woven that suffocates his sleep when he snores. Prostitutes and penthouse homes, but business is lord... He flew to Rio once to bust in some Brazilian whores then walked through favelas with an awesome grimaced remorse ...shot dead in the slums - a price to pay for shunning the wisdom of source. . Last edited by Seymour BUTTS; 08-01-2014 at 03:40 PM.

08-02-2014, 10:26 AM	#4
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	I appreciate both of you dropping. Both of you advance. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.