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lemme know
track is recorded in that order 1st badweather 2nd genocide 3rd marylandmade https://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/life
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seadad singing on the hook is golden
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Wtf. Bad weather sounds different. Flow is a bit off needs polishing. Lyrics are en okay. Gen killin it, nice flow. Good rhyme scheme. Good lyrics. Not bad. Maryland has a dope swag and sick voice. Wooo, he got some sick shit. Not bad
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Dope.
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remember when we ran marylandmade off of netcees in less than 2 hours
that was a good thread
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Haha i forgot about that dude. Rip
Also gamble petty as fuck trynna play seadad cuz he aint like his wack ass tracks haha Shame on u jason |
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You guys killed that shit.
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shit was dope fellas, wasn't sure what to expect but if ya'll had a whole album/mixtape type shit like this I could definitely cruise around listenin to it
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Production was millions of times better than last one
Seadad had good delivery, both of you had good delivery. But both verses were too busy/ heavy with lyrics and rhymes Slow down, rhyme more chill. If you're gonna have tons of rhymes rotate your schemes heavily instead of running for like 4 bars Idk I like the song cause it's you guys. But I wouldn't listen in the car, and if I played it on a set of speakers my friends e would be like "yo turn this off" after it hit the refrain/ hook thingy
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I guess what I'm saying is your songwriting is off but your rapping is good
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Genocide killed it. The beat was made for his style. Badweather sounded a bit uninspired, which might have worked on a solo version of this track. I can't stand MarylandMade's style, sounding like he's trying his hardest to emulate 1996 Eminem except that was 18 years ago. The chorus needs a lot of work, but this could make for a nice filler track.
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