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Old 07-24-2014, 04:41 PM   #1
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This was enjoyable. The rhyme scheme was on point. It was short and sweet. The content though was not spectacular because the theme is a bit cliche even though it may have pertinent value, but still a rendition that is praise worthy due to a well done execution.
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