07-22-2014, 10:29 AM | #41 |
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Having Comprehended the compendium I had to abandon Complex Friendships, So as to pursue and Connect Senses of mine to the Guardian Essence, -That was Gravy...niiice about half way thru' the lines started stretching longer in order to fit all your thoughts into them...made it more of a poem to me as I read... liked the 1st quarter the most... the rest was juz a deep reading...but it was well written...lotta insight here HoLLa |
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This thread became very tiresome and blowhard very quickly.
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besides, buddhism is simply a coping mechanism. ur basically letting go of ur ego which is effectively a rationalization anyway. if anything, u were forced into these buddhist teachings because u were alone and helpless and picked up on it because it psychologically allowed you to be a loser. u basically empowered urself instead of going out going to the gym, learning to talk to people and improving ur life. buddhism and all religions are a social construct anyway. look at the monks, they have a shit life with no internet. if i didnt have internet ur damn right i would go bat shit crazy
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I point to man's true nature in his heart, and sometimes that barrier of resistance is protected by their inner demons, and fortified by their pestilent emotions, thought patterns, and addictions that create resistance. I do not seek peace nor love because the more one seeks for them the less one has them. Peace and love are already intrinsic, but not superficial peace and love that dissipates and scatters when the going gets rough, and the comfortable things in life fade. But a peace as deep and hardened as one's bones in their youth, able to withstand and transform even the worse of conditions, all sickness, and upheaval and still maintain a calm heart. Also you haven't really counteracted any of what I've said, and only pick and choose statements, nitpicking as they call it. I acknowledge I bring challenge out of people, and many here reject me because I speak of things many don't speak of, and that brings out a resistance I fully understand. When some other person insults you you insult them back with usual verbose you are used to. But you cannot insult that which you do not understand, although you desperately try to categorize and devalue what I say so as to fit a paradigm your life has experienced because the abyss usually brings out fear. But there is nothing to fear, because the true illuminate light never leaves you, even when your surrounded by so called darkness. As for preaching, you are preaching a view right now. You get preached views, and perceptions of the world all the time by people trying to indoctrinate you. But what I and others speak of. not just me I'm not special, we speak of that which is beyond all views, and no views because one can easily say no view is a view as well. So what I'm imparting is not a particular set of beliefs, but simply to be aware of that awareness in you that transcends life and death, sickness, and all other maladies. Because no one in life can escape suffering, sickness or death. Although many experience it at various degrees, some more than others. Good or bad opinion or no opinion it doesn't matter what matters is that at least one word of this, one resonance of this meaning frees you from that which and binding, and constricting. the heart. As for this "worse of kind modest arrogance" I accept your views and propositions of what I am, but I know who I am because there is nothing left of me, and having let myself go the Suchness appeared. The beloved appeared. But who are you? Remember back to before you were born, or the pristine state you arrived into this world with, but abandoned, however being omnipresent it has never abandoned you. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 07-22-2014 at 02:05 PM. |
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I like your wording/ the technicality of your writing. Everything is stitched together well. I think presentation could be better (capitalizing rhymes, thread title choice).
The rhymes were nonstandard and flowed together well. The intro was rough.. you didn't provide any motivation/ reasoning for "seeking abyss" and the frame story of the birthday party felt forced. Just let it come across as a philosophical treatise a la Coup or Veritas. This was an "enlightenment flex" almost. Cool. You have a scholarly, abstract style that relies a lot on the reader's dissection of your collected themes. A mosaic/ modular narrative method. In places I was a tad lost in the references, more like a museum at night rather than a forest at dawn. Favorite line- "Every Instant your Pensive trying to Diminish the Limits constructed by that which believes Witnesses its Thinking is time wasted defeating a non-Existent Behemoth." conceptually sound & very rhythmic, though very dense. Looking forward to reading one of your stories/ "show, don't tell" type drops
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i will say tho, you cant browbeat people for finding meaning in pursuing success and valuable things. because life is intrinsically pointless, the only purpose of life is to extend the living potential of our species...staying alive and setting up a better life for our kids and their kids. success ties straight into that. and dont try to tell me that the meek will inherit the earth. cause aside from alien intervention (lol) and a mass catastrophic event, the meek will be weeded out through natural selection
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I have peace with who I am most of the time, as much as anyone can, I have peace with the world and with the people in it for the most part too...I don't need all the mystical shit to be a fulfilled and content person. You act like you are at constant peace, when that is not true and we both know it.
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i shove dildos in my ass and im schizophrenic and i fart on theologians 24/7 and im still better than you guys. so tbh useless.
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Everyone has their purpose, a destiny, a curriculum dictated by genetics, by fate, as well as one's yearning to find completion. Success is good, everyone needs to be fed, and warm, and so on. But failure is good too. It serves as a lesson of why we're embodied here in the first place, so we can through introspection begin to unravel the conditional tangles we've projected ourselves into. As for the meek, meekly as I am, I do know that nothing gets destroyed, its simply transformed, and moves in a flux that appears to wane, and be reborn. One can look to nature, which is an extension of you, for this process. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 07-22-2014 at 05:43 PM. |
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I respond to you, and you respond to me because we're interested in learning what cannot be learned from each other because what I question is not so different from what you question. What I experience is no different from what you experience. The difference lies in how open is our hearts to it. We are one in the same being wanting to merge, to unite. It is no coincidence you partook in this discussion. This discussion has everything to do with you, though you are resistant to your own change. Though change is going to happen whether we like it or not. And we will be reborn, until we no longer find the need to be born, and we return to the Unborn, which makes us one in the same. Since your liberation is my liberation. Your happiness is my happiness. Your suffering is my suffering. We all have inherently the One mind, the big self, though we have forgotten of it, and take it to be "mystical shit" as you say. Though it's truly who you are. Intrinsic goodness is also the function of what you are. I am interested in others relief from pain, though you may not be interested so much so in alleviating others. But you can start by alleviating your own wounds, and then you'll realize that by healing others wounds you help youself because others are not separate from you. This very "I" that keeps saying is content is a construct you have identified with. Looking at the world in seperation between I and others is a duality that is bound to create dissatisfaction. Simply because inherent in this dichotomy is an aversion to things, which gives rise to likes and dislikes. The dislikes create the vehement states that you see in others. I see your goodness, but its like the sun when covered by clouds. You on the otherhand do not see the sun. You say you understand, but if you truly understood, you wouldn't understand a thing at all. That which understands is the intellect, and the intellect being discriminatory will never understand that which is beyond all logic, all dichotomy, all rationalization, as well as irrationalization. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 07-22-2014 at 05:53 PM. |
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