Camp Bell vs. Vividlyvague [Camp Bell WINS]

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-19-2014, 07:37 AM

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e11even · 07-19-2014, 08:38 AM

Sup tho.

Camp Bell · 07-19-2014, 08:26 PM

....yup.

Camp Bell · 07-20-2014, 02:32 PM

i bet all vivids plays are light, my scripts tempting
so whoever said vegas bright, never been to sin city

e11even · 07-20-2014, 03:59 PM

You're rusty as shit... even truckers are droppin cb.
Text is concentration, camp! How could jew nazi I'm outta your league, chief?

BROKE LESNAR · 07-20-2014, 04:08 PM

I really liked Camp's np. The wording with my scripts tempting/never been to sin city could have been so much more beneficial to the np if it wasn't so choppy.

Vivid had an equally entertaining np. I know how jew/nazi was integral to assisting the concept, but their wordplays are incredibly unoriginal, lol. I think you would been better off not using them and just relying on the np itself along with u/not see. But then again, it wouldn't be as impactful.

I think it came down to who was more clever and original in their concepts regardless how well they were executed.

I have Camp Bell taking it.

v-Camp

Adonis · 07-22-2014, 08:58 PM

I camp winning this. I liked the light/Vegas play even if "My scripts tempting" is pure filler for rhyme sake. This could have caused you to lose Killa Kam, but... Vivid (dope av bruhv), I haven't been remotely involved in the battle scene in the past decade, but my short stint all those years ago means even I've seen "Not see/Nazi" before. Was a decent play for what it was due to the relevance of his name, but the punch was less effective due to the NP over usage.

King Ra. · 07-23-2014, 11:42 PM

Camp bell, you had an okay bar. The set up was alright. I did like the Vegas/bright play, but did feel it could have hit harder if you were a bit more creative with the punch. Plus scripts tempting/sin city is off rhyme wise a bit. Vivid, the jew/nazi wordplay is definitely dated. I think you should have went another direction going off the 'concentration camp' build up, which probably would have iced it for you because the direction you chose was cliche with the wordplay but a good attempt nonetheless. Got Camp on this one.

MVGT: Camp bell. Good job by both competitors.

Malachi · 07-24-2014, 06:09 PM

Campbell tempting dont rhyme wit sin city or city. lol
YOu had it set up nice but the punch was not there for me.

I thought Vivid play was nicer and i aint seen it before so fuck you.

V/ vivid

Destroyer · 07-24-2014, 10:47 PM

I got vivid taking this. I wouldn't have used the 'Jew nazi' part of it just cause it's mad played but I don't think it took too much away from his punch
Camp's shit did not rhyme to me. that shit may work in audio, but this is text brah

v/vivid

Blanco Bishop · 07-25-2014, 12:13 AM

Thought cb fumbled the punch. Also the rhyme was off.

Vivs was dope imo. Opener tied in well n there was plenty of wp.

V viv

Meth · 07-25-2014, 01:57 AM

Camp cool line if it was just smoother

Wasn't feeling vagues really

Mostly because nazi and not see... Has been done... A lot

jilti · 07-25-2014, 12:11 PM

Camps bar didnt really rhyme but it was a good concept.
Vivid had a cool set up with the truckers droppin cb line and concentration camp was nice too, but then it just fell flat

Vote Camp

Window Taco · 07-25-2014, 09:39 PM

I felt Campbell's punch while nice was too simple and vivid delivered a more potent line between the two. The nazi line I have seen b4 but it was freshened up a bit & landed harder IMO.

V/Vivid

Paradigm · 07-27-2014, 08:18 PM

@NotMeth

I don't know who your vote is for lol please edit in

4-4 otherwise

Meth · 07-27-2014, 08:31 PM

Voting for camp sorry @Paradigm

Dominate · 07-29-2014, 10:15 AM

V/ CB

Concentration camp wp been done to death plus "Jew nazi/you not see" is forced and corny.

Vague is/Vegas is less stretched. Could've been flipped better for a harder punch but still enough to take it

KnowP · 07-29-2014, 12:09 PM

Both had sick punches but I didn't really feel vivid was polished enough closing his punch out. Camps was executed better overall.

Vote camp

Meth · 07-30-2014, 06:16 PM

Camp wins

07-19-2014, 07:37 AM	#1
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899403	Camp Bell vs. Vividlyvague [Camp Bell WINS] The 1-2 Punch League Season 1 All rules are posted in a stickied thread in this forum. Go check before doing anything. You MUST CHECK IN within 48 hours of the battle being started. DUE WEDNESDAY MIDNIGHT PCT @Camp Bell @Vividlyvague

07-19-2014, 08:38 AM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	Sup tho. __________________ Ahem.

07-19-2014, 08:26 PM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	....yup. __________________ get high. write rhymes.

07-20-2014, 02:32 PM	#4
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	i bet all vivids plays are light, my scripts tempting so whoever said vegas bright, never been to sin city __________________ get high. write rhymes.

07-20-2014, 03:59 PM	#5
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	You're rusty as shit... even truckers are droppin cb. Text is concentration, camp! How could jew nazi I'm outta your league, chief? __________________ Ahem.

07-20-2014, 04:08 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I really liked Camp's np. The wording with my scripts tempting/never been to sin city could have been so much more beneficial to the np if it wasn't so choppy. Vivid had an equally entertaining np. I know how jew/nazi was integral to assisting the concept, but their wordplays are incredibly unoriginal, lol. I think you would been better off not using them and just relying on the np itself along with u/not see. But then again, it wouldn't be as impactful. I think it came down to who was more clever and original in their concepts regardless how well they were executed. I have Camp Bell taking it. v-Camp

07-22-2014, 08:58 PM	#7
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	I camp winning this. I liked the light/Vegas play even if "My scripts tempting" is pure filler for rhyme sake. This could have caused you to lose Killa Kam, but... Vivid (dope av bruhv), I haven't been remotely involved in the battle scene in the past decade, but my short stint all those years ago means even I've seen "Not see/Nazi" before. Was a decent play for what it was due to the relevance of his name, but the punch was less effective due to the NP over usage. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-23-2014, 11:42 PM	#8
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Camp bell, you had an okay bar. The set up was alright. I did like the Vegas/bright play, but did feel it could have hit harder if you were a bit more creative with the punch. Plus scripts tempting/sin city is off rhyme wise a bit. Vivid, the jew/nazi wordplay is definitely dated. I think you should have went another direction going off the 'concentration camp' build up, which probably would have iced it for you because the direction you chose was cliche with the wordplay but a good attempt nonetheless. Got Camp on this one. MVGT: Camp bell. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-24-2014, 06:09 PM	#9
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Campbell tempting dont rhyme wit sin city or city. lol YOu had it set up nice but the punch was not there for me. I thought Vivid play was nicer and i aint seen it before so fuck you. V/ vivid __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-25-2014, 12:13 AM	#11
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Thought cb fumbled the punch. Also the rhyme was off. Vivs was dope imo. Opener tied in well n there was plenty of wp. V viv

07-25-2014, 01:57 AM	#12
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489508	Camp cool line if it was just smoother Wasn't feeling vagues really Mostly because nazi and not see... Has been done... A lot __________________ Crystal

07-25-2014, 12:11 PM	#13
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	Camps bar didnt really rhyme but it was a good concept. Vivid had a cool set up with the truckers droppin cb line and concentration camp was nice too, but then it just fell flat Vote Camp

07-25-2014, 09:39 PM	#14
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	I felt Campbell's punch while nice was too simple and vivid delivered a more potent line between the two. The nazi line I have seen b4 but it was freshened up a bit & landed harder IMO. V/Vivid __________________ aka windu tuako

07-27-2014, 08:18 PM	#15
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033508	@NotMeth I don't know who your vote is for lol please edit in 4-4 otherwise

07-27-2014, 08:31 PM	#16
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489508	Voting for camp sorry @Paradigm __________________ Crystal

07-29-2014, 10:15 AM	#17
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,310 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	V/ CB Concentration camp wp been done to death plus "Jew nazi/you not see" is forced and corny. Vague is/Vegas is less stretched. Could've been flipped better for a harder punch but still enough to take it __________________ The Bad Guys

07-29-2014, 12:09 PM	#18
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	Both had sick punches but I didn't really feel vivid was polished enough closing his punch out. Camps was executed better overall. Vote camp

07-30-2014, 06:16 PM	#19
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489508	Camp wins __________________ Crystal