Amen vs. Malachi - [Amen WINS]

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-19-2014, 07:33 AM

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07-19-2014, 09:37 AM

Yerp.

Malachi · 07-19-2014, 11:01 AM

Chekaa

07-19-2014, 12:14 PM

I fuck pussy in ALL types of positions, leave'em sore & damage them,
When Malposition’n pussy… His moms wished the umbilical chord strangled him.

Malachi · 07-24-2014, 01:54 AM

Hoes worhsip me ya virgin, you stressin cause yo girl no exception pal
Only way amen can get in her mouth ever, is if shes prayin to Mal

BROKE LESNAR · 07-24-2014, 02:38 AM

Amen - you should of added the s to malposition, it still would have worked and come off way smoother..malpositions' n pussy as opposed to malposition'n. Great bar.

Malachi - only way amen could get in her mouth ever..really did a disservice to the execution of ur bar. I think saying only way amen could ever get in her mouth would have been a much better direction to take it. Also the way it ended with..is if she prayin to mal felt somewhat abrupt. Not a bad attempt, though.

v-Amen

Destroyer · 07-24-2014, 11:05 PM

I liked mal's line better
the fact that his name is Amen is confusing because you want to read it like a nameplay like the only way 'Aman' can get in her mouth, but that's not the concept
it's the only way Amen can get in her mouth is when she's praying to mal. that's clever shit.
Amen's punch was worded poorly IMO and doesn't really rhyme either

v/malachi

e11even · 07-24-2014, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amen

I fuck pussy in ALL types of positions, leave'em sore & damage them,
When Malposition’n pussy… His moms wished the umbilical chord strangled him.

To me this came of as a poorly worded/ executed punch. Not sure how others feel, but I felt like this didn't quite hit,

Quote:

Originally Posted by Malachi

Hoes worhsip me ya virgin, you stressin cause yo girl no exception pal
Only way amen can get in her mouth ever, is if shes prayin to Mal

I really had ta read a vote to catch this punch. That was clever. I dug it way more than the Amen drop. Good stuff.

Meth · 07-25-2014, 02:00 AM

Had to read Mal's like 7 times but it finally struck me. It was pretty cool

Mal

Adonis · 07-25-2014, 02:09 AM

A Dis vs. Bragadocia in a battle contest = dis will always win

V/ Amen

Two crisp and solid bars though

Blanco Bishop · 07-25-2014, 10:10 AM

I felt three praying to mal part made no sence to me. I get the amen n praying part but maybe u should of used an on her knees reference.
Amens bar was pretty harsh n solid to me. I like the concept n execution.

V amen

Doug Funny · 07-25-2014, 11:23 AM

Amen yours is good but I think mals was smoother and hit harder

Window Taco · 07-25-2014, 09:48 PM

Tough battle to decide with this one. Two pretty good lines but I feel Amen's was a lot fresher since I haven't heard it, the nameplay hit harder, and the flow was a bit better. Mak good line as well but I gotta go with your opponent for more originality & impact here.

V/Amen

King Ra. · 07-27-2014, 08:25 AM

Interesting. Amen, I have a love/hate relationship with your bar. The set up was okay. The nameplay attempt is a bit awkward. And for me, it's because of the punch you used to deliver it. It doesn't seem to connect for me. Probably could have reworded it to make it more cleaner. Mal, I have a similar issue with your bar as well. But for yours, it's more of the fact that the "punch" aspect reads a bit more bragging than a straight punch.

Reading both bars a couple more times... Amen's set up was a self-hype set up leading to a nameplay-punch connection which doesn't deliver much for me. Mal's set up was a direct shot, leading to his nameplay-punch connection, which comes off more brag than punch, but still has a bit more of a connection. All in all, Mal's bar reads more cleaner, smoother for me while Amen's seemed to build up to the nameplay-punch... but slightly misses the point.

MVGT: Malachi. Good job by both competitors.

Paradigm · 07-27-2014, 08:29 PM

5-4 Malachi

Is it really that hard to put

Vote - (Person you are voting for)

at the end of your vote people lol

Dominate · 07-29-2014, 10:19 AM

V/ Amen

Dug both to some extent but Amen's moreso. Mal's flip seemed a little too contrived to make the wp work.

KnowP · 07-29-2014, 12:13 PM

Good battle. Felt amen punch was nice af. Mal yours was good too, but the amen/prayer flip has been done to death and this flip could of been better.

Vote amen

e11even · 07-30-2014, 04:10 AM

MVGT mal btw.

YDK · 07-30-2014, 02:59 PM

vote amen

close battle an mal had a good punch but the wording was just a bit off while amen's concept and execution was enough to win my vote

07-30-2014, 05:40 PM

Amen 7 - Mal 5 - Can we get some more votes?

07-19-2014, 07:33 AM	#1
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899403	Amen vs. Malachi - [Amen WINS] The 1-2 Punch League Season 1 All rules are posted in a stickied thread in this forum. Go check before doing anything. You MUST CHECK IN within 48 hours of the battle being started. @Amen @Malachi

07-19-2014, 11:01 AM	#3
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Chekaa __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-19-2014, 12:14 PM	#4
Amen Guest Posts: n/a	I fuck pussy in ALL types of positions, leave'em sore & damage them, When Malposition’n pussy… His moms wished the umbilical chord strangled him. Last edited by Amen; 07-19-2014 at 12:29 PM.

07-24-2014, 01:54 AM	#5
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Hoes worhsip me ya virgin, you stressin cause yo girl no exception pal Only way amen can get in her mouth ever, is if shes prayin to Mal __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-25-2014, 02:00 AM	#9
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489508	Had to read Mal's like 7 times but it finally struck me. It was pretty cool Mal __________________ Crystal

07-24-2014, 02:38 AM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Amen - you should of added the s to malposition, it still would have worked and come off way smoother..malpositions' n pussy as opposed to malposition'n. Great bar. Malachi - only way amen could get in her mouth ever..really did a disservice to the execution of ur bar. I think saying only way amen could ever get in her mouth would have been a much better direction to take it. Also the way it ended with..is if she prayin to mal felt somewhat abrupt. Not a bad attempt, though. v-Amen

07-25-2014, 02:09 AM	#10
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	A Dis vs. Bragadocia in a battle contest = dis will always win V/ Amen Two crisp and solid bars though __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-25-2014, 10:10 AM	#11
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	I felt three praying to mal part made no sence to me. I get the amen n praying part but maybe u should of used an on her knees reference. Amens bar was pretty harsh n solid to me. I like the concept n execution. V amen

07-25-2014, 11:23 AM	#12
Doug Funny Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 159 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3922020	Amen yours is good but I think mals was smoother and hit harder

07-25-2014, 09:48 PM	#13
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	Tough battle to decide with this one. Two pretty good lines but I feel Amen's was a lot fresher since I haven't heard it, the nameplay hit harder, and the flow was a bit better. Mak good line as well but I gotta go with your opponent for more originality & impact here. V/Amen __________________ aka windu tuako

07-27-2014, 08:25 AM	#14
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Interesting. Amen, I have a love/hate relationship with your bar. The set up was okay. The nameplay attempt is a bit awkward. And for me, it's because of the punch you used to deliver it. It doesn't seem to connect for me. Probably could have reworded it to make it more cleaner. Mal, I have a similar issue with your bar as well. But for yours, it's more of the fact that the "punch" aspect reads a bit more bragging than a straight punch. Reading both bars a couple more times... Amen's set up was a self-hype set up leading to a nameplay-punch connection which doesn't deliver much for me. Mal's set up was a direct shot, leading to his nameplay-punch connection, which comes off more brag than punch, but still has a bit more of a connection. All in all, Mal's bar reads more cleaner, smoother for me while Amen's seemed to build up to the nameplay-punch... but slightly misses the point. MVGT: Malachi. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-27-2014, 08:29 PM	#15
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033508	5-4 Malachi Is it really that hard to put Vote - (Person you are voting for) at the end of your vote people lol

07-29-2014, 10:19 AM	#16
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,310 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	V/ Amen Dug both to some extent but Amen's moreso. Mal's flip seemed a little too contrived to make the wp work. __________________ The Bad Guys

07-29-2014, 12:13 PM	#17
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	Good battle. Felt amen punch was nice af. Mal yours was good too, but the amen/prayer flip has been done to death and this flip could of been better. Vote amen

07-30-2014, 04:10 AM	#18
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	MVGT mal btw. __________________ Ahem.

07-30-2014, 02:59 PM	#19
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	vote amen close battle an mal had a good punch but the wording was just a bit off while amen's concept and execution was enough to win my vote __________________

07-30-2014, 05:40 PM	#20
Amen Guest Posts: n/a	Amen 7 - Mal 5 - Can we get some more votes?