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07-18-2014, 01:11 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
- Art of Writing League (2x)
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Chyeahhhh Guevara: Your wordplay brought down a technically fine verse. Almost all of it was garbage and forced and awkward and unnecessary. It cut into the swagger of the verse, though the flow was fine.
Neighbor: You read anatomy books and subscribes to Guns & Ammo magazine just for swag and flow verses. This was absurd. Have fun winning this tournament if you show on this level every round. Vote: Neighbor
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