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03-25-2013, 11:21 PM
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What a strong opening line. I read it 3 times, science fact. Then your verse sucked for a little bit, and the ending was cool. I thought, after reading the first bar, I was in for a treat. But it was just a rice cake. Ink- Better rhymes than Objectivo. But you really straddled (LOL STRADDLE) the line between cool reading and corny as fuck. Pretty darn close, fellas. v/ Objective
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