AOWL Week 6: Vinzr (3-0) VS. Adonis (2-0) [ADONIS WINS, 12-0.]

[Mike Wrecka]

ya nice battle guys.

adonis - very polished verse. it was easy to read while possesing complex structure. thats a huge compliment imo. as writers we should try to reach as big of an audience as possible, while not dumbing down our mechanics. you did this fantastically here. very much diggin your style.

Tired of the fighting. The greed and gluttony,
The tummy tuck so the gullet can feed comfortably,

loved the way that line sounds. good work. excellent take on the topic. the third stanza wasnt quite on par with the first two but awesome none the less.


vinzr - ive really enjoyed your two previous drops. this one not nearly as much. i like your style as well, but you lacked inner and multis which made it seem slightly basic in structure in a few spots. i appreciate what you going for, cause it was easy to read like adonis's was. it just needed a little more complexity in the flow imo. story wise it didnt have as much as i was looking for. good drop dont get me wrong, just not on the level you came last two weeks. with that being said, it was a very solid verse, good work and props deserved to you.

overall- adonis had a real strong verse and vinzr couldnt overcome it

vote- adonis