Milk and Honey

Illume · 07-10-2014, 04:42 PM

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Kin · 07-10-2014, 04:51 PM

This shit was deep as hell...like how u incorporated the girl an the guy characters

To comprise a real thought and give their disguises up?
Whoa!....that made me read it twice....deep

This is hot all around...droppin some real thoughts here....ima fan

HoLLa

dead man · 07-10-2014, 05:10 PM

truuuuuue

DexLabb · 07-10-2014, 05:18 PM

dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation

Dope girl · 07-10-2014, 07:07 PM

this was fun to read, I love your creativity.

Illume · 07-10-2014, 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation

Trust you to think this has anything to do with my own gain. You're an idiot.

Cheers for the props all you folks. Always good to hear a rhyme's liked.

Geno · 07-11-2014, 01:53 PM

different kind of shit. i dont know. wasnt the greatest mechanically -obviously. but the content was ok i guess. seemed a little childish at times and just quickly thrown down without using any creativity at all really. thats what makes hip hop fun, its not what you say -its how you say it and the styles you use to say the things your saying. work on you, or in other words, work on being more unique

Pinot Grij · 07-11-2014, 10:21 PM

This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job.

Illume · 07-11-2014, 10:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job.

Nice to hear man. I'm a fan.

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dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,468 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	truuuuuue __________________ Zack Wicks for president

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DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

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Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	different kind of shit. i dont know. wasnt the greatest mechanically -obviously. but the content was ok i guess. seemed a little childish at times and just quickly thrown down without using any creativity at all really. thats what makes hip hop fun, its not what you say -its how you say it and the styles you use to say the things your saying. work on you, or in other words, work on being more unique __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195061	This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

07-10-2014, 04:51 PM	#2
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	This shit was deep as hell...like how u incorporated the girl an the guy characters To comprise a real thought and give their disguises up? Whoa!....that made me read it twice....deep This is hot all around...droppin some real thoughts here....ima fan HoLLa

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Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	this was fun to read, I love your creativity.