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Illume 07-10-2014 04:42 PM

Milk and Honey
 
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Kin 07-10-2014 04:51 PM

This shit was deep as hell...like how u incorporated the girl an the guy characters

To comprise a real thought and give their disguises up?
Whoa!....that made me read it twice....deep

This is hot all around...droppin some real thoughts here....ima fan

HoLLa

dead man 07-10-2014 05:10 PM

truuuuuue

DexLabb 07-10-2014 05:18 PM

dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation

Dope girl 07-10-2014 07:07 PM

this was fun to read, I love your creativity.

Illume 07-10-2014 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb (Post 361276)
dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation

Trust you to think this has anything to do with my own gain. You're an idiot.

Cheers for the props all you folks. Always good to hear a rhyme's liked.

Geno 07-11-2014 01:53 PM

different kind of shit. i dont know. wasnt the greatest mechanically -obviously. but the content was ok i guess. seemed a little childish at times and just quickly thrown down without using any creativity at all really. thats what makes hip hop fun, its not what you say -its how you say it and the styles you use to say the things your saying. work on you, or in other words, work on being more unique

Pinot Grij 07-11-2014 10:21 PM

This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job.

Illume 07-11-2014 10:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij (Post 361897)
This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job.

Nice to hear man. I'm a fan.


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