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Milk and Honey
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This shit was deep as hell...like how u incorporated the girl an the guy characters
To comprise a real thought and give their disguises up? Whoa!....that made me read it twice....deep This is hot all around...droppin some real thoughts here....ima fan HoLLa |
truuuuuue
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dude. shit's classic. can't become successful so you convince urself that you do not want to become successful and that you made the choice not to. oooh success is a terrible thing tearing the world apart slowly bleh bleh bleh - its just mental compensation
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this was fun to read, I love your creativity.
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different kind of shit. i dont know. wasnt the greatest mechanically -obviously. but the content was ok i guess. seemed a little childish at times and just quickly thrown down without using any creativity at all really. thats what makes hip hop fun, its not what you say -its how you say it and the styles you use to say the things your saying. work on you, or in other words, work on being more unique
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This was a cool read... serious subject matter, but the writing didn't take itself too seriously.. very casual. Fun shit. Good job.
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