AOWL Week 6: c.d.m (2-3) VS. Zenland (2-3) [ZENLAND WINS, 8-3.]

Red glare · 03-25-2013, 04:00 PM

zenland; admired the flow of this jawn... you did not commit to any 1 rhyme scheme...
it was sporadic; fresh and unsettling....
great job of staying on your toes with the flows...bobbing and weaving man...
the story itself was free spirited man... it read like a runaway cargo train man

c.d.m; I could tell you read the bible man; it shows... good verse man
you lost ground after the blam line; lost your footing man...
picked it up in the end with the corners and ''looking up to me'' quote
more of that would've been dope man instead of the; vague plague

good battle. v/ zenland. flow was unqiue and story had heart.

03-25-2013, 04:00 PM	#11
Red glare Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 189 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 0	zenland; admired the flow of this jawn... you did not commit to any 1 rhyme scheme... it was sporadic; fresh and unsettling.... great job of staying on your toes with the flows...bobbing and weaving man... the story itself was free spirited man... it read like a runaway cargo train man c.d.m; I could tell you read the bible man; it shows... good verse man you lost ground after the blam line; lost your footing man... picked it up in the end with the corners and ''looking up to me'' quote more of that would've been dope man instead of the; vague plague good battle. v/ zenland. flow was unqiue and story had heart.