07-07-2014, 05:24 PM | #1 |
(ง'̀-'́)ง
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Unfukwitable vs. YDK {YDK wins by NS}
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07-07-2014, 08:10 PM | #2 |
ghost in the matrix
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07-07-2014, 11:29 PM | #3 |
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Check.
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07-08-2014, 08:20 PM | #4 |
ghost in the matrix
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I've got 2 kids; a wife, a beautiful daughter, and son,
meanwhile this lame's name tells us exactly why he'll never have one
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07-12-2014, 09:30 AM | #5 |
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07-13-2014, 02:25 PM | #6 |
βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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I really liked the concept of this bar, but the one thing that hurt it was listing the wife and kids and then finishing with he'll never have one. I thought you could have thrown having a life or family in there directly instead of leaving any open interpretation to get tangled on.
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07-13-2014, 03:46 PM | #7 |
ghost in the matrix
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thanks man i'm a bit rusty lol
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07-13-2014, 09:10 PM | #8 |
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LOL pretty witty, cool bar
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07-14-2014, 10:08 AM | #9 |
Tread Lightly.
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Cool. Perhaps a bit too obv for a name flip but executed well
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07-15-2014, 01:48 PM | #10 |
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Cool line. Definately got the job done.
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