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this waas great, especially the line...
"Can you return to water a freed ship from a bottle?" cus a ship built in a bottle is a lot like a slave itself, looking like a ship/person but not being considered a ship/person, then when its out of the bottle/slavery it might question if its really a ship, like ur slave did in the climax, accepting his slavery. very well done.
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