IS BIG GAME REGISTERED HERE YET!??! LMFAOAHSKAANA WELCOME TO AOB FAGIT AHAHA

[~RustyGunZ~]

This will prove to be a good use of time for my lunch break

[super pimp trillionaire]

Bags, they don't like direct questions. That's why dis thread is sitting untouched for eleven hours...

[J.R.]

there was no self glory in that...he asked why i drop my name after i say sumthin...that adressd him personally..and tha first bar was at bags...

Allen...man i swear i jus had checked your battles..them shyts was straight dirt
all yall shyt is basic...shyt like

"this battle was over before it started
didnt wanna do it, becuz your retarded" - AOB

but tha lines woulda been stretched all tha way across tha page and shyt lol

yall tha only niggas i know that can drop all stretched bars and still not say shyt...once i read through yo shyt allen i didnt even need to see anymore...


but like i said...its a preference..and im not gone even knock yall...stay up

Sass

[Sn00p]

Flo Matic, you rap like you Hold Ratchets
jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics, but you Lackin tha Whole Package
Okay. 'You rap like you Hold Ratchets'? First off, good looks on capitalizing your multies. They're that much easier to find this way. How does someone rap when he raps like he holds ratchets? Does he hold the ratchets awkwardly and thus you diss him by saying he raps awkwardly? Does his rap sound like a ratchet? Are people that hold ratchets dumb and thus, his rap is dumb? Please enlighten me. Also, you forgot to capitalize the 'rap'. It's part of your multi. By saying 'jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics', are you trying to hit him with that? As in, insulting him? Because cold tactics seems to be some O.G. shit. Which would be more of a compliment. Or are you trying to infer that he justs acts as if he was an O.G. instead of saying he is an act with cold tactics? Also, the plural of the noun doesn't usually need a 'the', much less a 'tha'. Well, I think you're trying to say he just acts like he's wit tha cold tactics, but then why do you follow it with 'but'? So you WERE complimenting him with it. 'But' he does lack the whole package. If he lacks the whole package, that means he has nothing. But you just said he IS an act wit tha cold tactics? Hmm.
i Mold Havoc, boutta turn me back to my Old Habbits
you write Fiction, you want Friction, at best you'd get Slow Static
You 'Mold Havoc'. Damn, that's clever: You say you're 'creating destruction' -- great oxymoron right there. Good shit. And it's even capitalized, so I knew it was a multi from the start. And the punchline is good too. I mean, it has inners (Fiction/Friction rhyme perfectly too!). And the friction/static metaphor really ties the whole thing together. Props.
see, i dont "Expo" lines, i jus Expose Lines
to stretch those spines, you drivin into a Text Road Mine
So you expose lines to stretch spines? Okay. And all the while your opponent is merely driving into a text road mine? Damn. What is he doing in there? Digging for texts AND roads? Must be a tough job. Also, the 'drivin' connects with the 'road' part wonderfully. I can downright see your opponent digging up roads in his old road mine and then using those same roads to drive home on them. Nice.
i set heads on fire, not like Exoduzt when he dropped tha "Burnin Man"
im talkin bout tha flash backs Mike Jackson got every time he sipped a Pepsi Can
If only this hadn't been old when Royce did it two years ago. :(
so what now? you gone jump in this thread and Check Me?
dont you think we know you a undercover agent for LetsBeef?
I think you mean gon'. As in, the shortened version of 'gonna'. 'Gone' is a totally different word, my friend. As for the punch...Uhm. No.
fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat
It's 'saw' not 'seen' there. But I suppose you know that. Good move, trying to solidify your street credit with this nonchalant disregard for tenses. So if you meet your opponent, there would be less meat? Why? Are you trying to steal his meat? Take away his hamburgers and leave him with nothing but salad? That IS cruel, but I'm lost on why you chose to make that the focal point of your punchline.
look, im not one of these Coward Guys, got pull cuz im Down to Ride
battlin my homie was tha only time you thought of Pushin Hom Aside
ho·mi·cide noun \ˈhä-mə-ˌsīd, ˈhō-\
down adverb \ˈdau̇n\
ä or ō
au̇
Somehow, I don't think that rhymes.
readin your verse, i caint even count how many Times i Sighed
cuz i never got High, no matter how many Lines i Tried
Yeah... We've already told you that this is not quite a novelty of a line.
so take ya rhymes off of tha market, you gettin No Sales
once i come through swangin these hammers, im like a Folk Tale
Oh, I get it. Because Folk Tales are swangin hammers... Wait... They don't! Huh? What are you trying to say then? I'm puzzled.
every thing i touch is molten, i got Lava Spits
Flo Matic is all Technology, he got Java Scripts
Everything you touch is molten? So it's already molten prior to you touching it? Otherwise, you would've said 'everything I touch melts', surely. So you're touching molten things. And what you spit is lava. So you touch your spits? Aight. And the only scripts your opponent has are Java Scripts? Damn. He hasn't even got a single verse? Because all of his lines are merely lines of code? What a nerd...

I didn't really want to look at your last two lines, as I got bored... Sorry. :(

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Sn00p we should hold a LA crossover tutoring tournament tbh

[Allen Knight]

u trash

shyt shoulda happened last week, you retarded thinkin you would Surpass Me
you'd get X'ed to become a notch in my belt, ask Y, i told em i had to Ad-Z


OHH THAT WASSS DOPE SON AN U BOLDED THE X Y N Z
played as fuck lollll

[Sn00p]

@J.R., @Bags and I have some questions regarding your verse... Care to answer them?

[veritas]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

Flo Matic, you rap like you Hold Ratchets
jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics, but you Lackin tha Whole Package
Okay. 'You rap like you Hold Ratchets'? First off, good looks on capitalizing your multies. They're that much easier to find this way. How does someone rap when he raps like he holds ratchets? Does he hold the ratchets awkwardly and thus you diss him by saying he raps awkwardly? Does his rap sound like a ratchet? Are people that hold ratchets dumb and thus, his rap is dumb? Please enlighten me. Also, you forgot to capitalize the 'rap'. It's part of your multi. By saying 'jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics', are you trying to hit him with that? As in, insulting him? Because cold tactics seems to be some O.G. shit. Which would be more of a compliment. Or are you trying to infer that he justs acts as if he was an O.G. instead of saying he is an act with cold tactics? Also, the plural of the noun doesn't usually need a 'the', much less a 'tha'. Well, I think you're trying to say he just acts like he's wit tha cold tactics, but then why do you follow it with 'but'? So you WERE complimenting him with it. 'But' he does lack the whole package. If he lacks the whole package, that means he has nothing. But you just said he IS an act wit tha cold tactics? Hmm.
i Mold Havoc, boutta turn me back to my Old Habbits
you write Fiction, you want Friction, at best you'd get Slow Static
You 'Mold Havoc'. Damn, that's clever: You say you're 'creating destruction' -- great oxymoron right there. Good shit. And it's even capitalized, so I knew it was a multi from the start. And the punchline is good too. I mean, it has inners (Fiction/Friction rhyme perfectly too!). And the friction/static metaphor really ties the whole thing together. Props.
see, i dont "Expo" lines, i jus Expose Lines
to stretch those spines, you drivin into a Text Road Mine
So you expose lines to stretch spines? Okay. And all the while your opponent is merely driving into a text road mine? Damn. What is he doing in there? Digging for texts AND roads? Must be a tough job. Also, the 'drivin' connects with the 'road' part wonderfully. I can downright see your opponent digging up roads in his old road mine and then using those same roads to drive home on them. Nice.
i set heads on fire, not like Exoduzt when he dropped tha "Burnin Man"
im talkin bout tha flash backs Mike Jackson got every time he sipped a Pepsi Can
If only this hadn't been old when Royce did it two years ago. :(
so what now? you gone jump in this thread and Check Me?
dont you think we know you a undercover agent for LetsBeef?
I think you mean gon'. As in, the shortened version of 'gonna'. 'Gone' is a totally different word, my friend. As for the punch...Uhm. No.
fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat
It's 'saw' not 'seen' there. But I suppose you know that. Good move, trying to solidify your street credit with this nonchalant disregard for tenses. So if you meet your opponent, there would be less meat? Why? Are you trying to steal his meat? Take away his hamburgers and leave him with nothing but salad? That IS cruel, but I'm lost on why you chose to make that the focal point of your punchline.
look, im not one of these Coward Guys, got pull cuz im Down to Ride
battlin my homie was tha only time you thought of Pushin Hom Aside
ho·mi·cide noun \ˈhä-mə-ˌsīd, ˈhō-\
down adverb \ˈdau̇n\
ä or ō
au̇
Somehow, I don't think that rhymes.
readin your verse, i caint even count how many Times i Sighed
cuz i never got High, no matter how many Lines i Tried
Yeah... We've already told you that this is not quite a novelty of a line.
so take ya rhymes off of tha market, you gettin No Sales
once i come through swangin these hammers, im like a Folk Tale
Oh, I get it. Because Folk Tales are swangin hammers... Wait... They don't! Huh? What are you trying to say then? I'm puzzled.
every thing i touch is molten, i got Lava Spits
Flo Matic is all Technology, he got Java Scripts
Everything you touch is molten? So it's already molten prior to you touching it? Otherwise, you would've said 'everything I touch melts', surely. So you're touching molten things. And what you spit is lava. So you touch your spits? Aight. And the only scripts your opponent has are Java Scripts? Damn. He hasn't even got a single verse? Because all of his lines are merely lines of code? What a nerd...

I didn't really want to look at your last two lines, as I got bored... Sorry. :(

Infinity dead

[Sn00p]

As for the insult/punch discussion, how does ending a punchline with an insult make that punchline not be a punch anymore? By that logic, ending a punchline with 'bitch' would mean you're solely insulting your opponent without a punch. I do agree that insults only are whack, but no one here uses insults without punches?

[Strikta]

Sass.

Sn00p would body u w/out even trying tho.. & u come at me w/ that bullshit?

lol

We can write over here mane.. take ur preschool bullshit elsewhere.

[Witty]

Originally Posted by J.R.

aight ima do this jus for you...and ima honest type nigga..ima always keep it real wit you...so ima drop you sum feed

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg

aight now this line was nice, but it wasnt a punch line...you Big Upped yoself..it started off to be a punch then when you started talkin about yourself it went to you uppin yoself

plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak

once again...gas strik was goin nice then you jus flat out called em a Disgusting Freak...you was boutta make a punch but then you settled jus for a basic insult

& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners

aight seriously...i got homies that not in tha US and english aint they first laguage either..but this did not Rhyme my nigga...are yall ridin his nuts that hard that yall gone say it did?

dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well

ok i guess that was a personal...but look what you did with it..that coulda been a hot line if you woulda formed a punchline out of it..but still just another insult

plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts

theres a punchline my nigga...but it wasnt to hard hittin but atleast you didnt jus flat out call em a "retard" or sum shyt...

see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow

[I]um this was not to hard hittin...but you coulda did sumthin really nice with this...ima give you an example[I/]

blah blah blah blah blah.......you Been a Clown
you rappin in Circles, cuz a noshow is tha only time you can Win A Round

you see what i did there..i took it and punched..but you have no internal rhymes no transit lines goin into your next bars
look it all comes down to preference...if thats yall style over here then i caint knock...who am i to judge but i am gone keep it real with you tho

& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body

oh i missed this one...i actually liked this line lol



Sass

tl;dr

[Witty]

fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat

lmaooooo oh God....stop it, I can't breathe, I can't breathe....stop it.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

Flo Matic, you rap like you Hold Ratchets
jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics, but you Lackin tha Whole Package
Okay. 'You rap like you Hold Ratchets'? First off, good looks on capitalizing your multies. They're that much easier to find this way. How does someone rap when he raps like he holds ratchets? Does he hold the ratchets awkwardly and thus you diss him by saying he raps awkwardly? Does his rap sound like a ratchet? Are people that hold ratchets dumb and thus, his rap is dumb? Please enlighten me. Also, you forgot to capitalize the 'rap'. It's part of your multi. By saying 'jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics', are you trying to hit him with that? As in, insulting him? Because cold tactics seems to be some O.G. shit. Which would be more of a compliment. Or are you trying to infer that he justs acts as if he was an O.G. instead of saying he is an act with cold tactics? Also, the plural of the noun doesn't usually need a 'the', much less a 'tha'. Well, I think you're trying to say he just acts like he's wit tha cold tactics, but then why do you follow it with 'but'? So you WERE complimenting him with it. 'But' he does lack the whole package. If he lacks the whole package, that means he has nothing. But you just said he IS an act wit tha cold tactics? Hmm.
i Mold Havoc, boutta turn me back to my Old Habbits
you write Fiction, you want Friction, at best you'd get Slow Static
You 'Mold Havoc'. Damn, that's clever: You say you're 'creating destruction' -- great oxymoron right there. Good shit. And it's even capitalized, so I knew it was a multi from the start. And the punchline is good too. I mean, it has inners (Fiction/Friction rhyme perfectly too!). And the friction/static metaphor really ties the whole thing together. Props.
see, i dont "Expo" lines, i jus Expose Lines
to stretch those spines, you drivin into a Text Road Mine
So you expose lines to stretch spines? Okay. And all the while your opponent is merely driving into a text road mine? Damn. What is he doing in there? Digging for texts AND roads? Must be a tough job. Also, the 'drivin' connects with the 'road' part wonderfully. I can downright see your opponent digging up roads in his old road mine and then using those same roads to drive home on them. Nice.
i set heads on fire, not like Exoduzt when he dropped tha "Burnin Man"
im talkin bout tha flash backs Mike Jackson got every time he sipped a Pepsi Can
If only this hadn't been old when Royce did it two years ago. :(
so what now? you gone jump in this thread and Check Me?
dont you think we know you a undercover agent for LetsBeef?
I think you mean gon'. As in, the shortened version of 'gonna'. 'Gone' is a totally different word, my friend. As for the punch...Uhm. No.
fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat
It's 'saw' not 'seen' there. But I suppose you know that. Good move, trying to solidify your street credit with this nonchalant disregard for tenses. So if you meet your opponent, there would be less meat? Why? Are you trying to steal his meat? Take away his hamburgers and leave him with nothing but salad? That IS cruel, but I'm lost on why you chose to make that the focal point of your punchline.
look, im not one of these Coward Guys, got pull cuz im Down to Ride
battlin my homie was tha only time you thought of Pushin Hom Aside
ho·mi·cide noun \ˈhä-mə-ˌsīd, ˈhō-\
down adverb \ˈdau̇n\
ä or ō
au̇
Somehow, I don't think that rhymes.
readin your verse, i caint even count how many Times i Sighed
cuz i never got High, no matter how many Lines i Tried
Yeah... We've already told you that this is not quite a novelty of a line.
so take ya rhymes off of tha market, you gettin No Sales
once i come through swangin these hammers, im like a Folk Tale
Oh, I get it. Because Folk Tales are swangin hammers... Wait... They don't! Huh? What are you trying to say then? I'm puzzled.
every thing i touch is molten, i got Lava Spits
Flo Matic is all Technology, he got Java Scripts
Everything you touch is molten? So it's already molten prior to you touching it? Otherwise, you would've said 'everything I touch melts', surely. So you're touching molten things. And what you spit is lava. So you touch your spits? Aight. And the only scripts your opponent has are Java Scripts? Damn. He hasn't even got a single verse? Because all of his lines are merely lines of code? What a nerd...

I didn't really want to look at your last two lines, as I got bored... Sorry. :(

crippled


tho i am serious ion wanting "expos" on these inquires, min and sn00ps pls, i feel they r just in questioning the meanings/motives behind sum of these outlandish lines

[Witty]

Oh and there's nothing left to say.

Sn00p already ripped your weak attempts in half.

[Nigma]

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[Strikta]

Originally Posted by Witty

fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat

lmaooooo oh God....stop it, I can't breathe, I can't breathe....stop it.

lmao

Wow that shit sucks dog dick.

[Zen]

@Stritka I was just about to change the shit under my name to say I'm the one who knocks lol.



ZenLand

[Strikta]

Tell me that shit ain't fucking dope tho.

But word lol.. Walt da fucking GOD.

[God Of War]

lmao sass is ass sn00p would rape that dude, i peeped his verses last night dude has no idea wtf he talking bout



11 page tho? shit it was only like 2 when i left rofl

[Zen]

Walt's the shit lol.
But I wish these guys would tutor me because they're so ill and dope yo but sadly I'm a just a white boy living in my mom's basement eating left over microwaved meatloaf and I know you gangstas don't play that.


ZenLand