AOWL Week 6: Brass Body (0-0) VS. TopicalDood5 (0-0) [TOPICALDOOD5 wins, 8-3.]

Zen · 03-25-2013, 12:27 PM

Damn great battle you two for your first week here. Props.
Brass Body: As a huge boxing fan I fucking loved the story here. The read was easy as hell because of your writing. Great multies dispersed throughout the piece to get it entertaining and create a truly vivid image of the damage incurred on a boxer during his career. All in all I gotta say you've got talent man. I enjoyed this props.
TopicalDood5: I hate your name, but from the opening line of your piece I knew I was gonna love your piece haha. You have a way with words truly that makes every line a standout and repeatable. That's something that's very hard to do and I have to give you props for that. As far as the story goes, excellent story and I have nothing negative to say about it because I loved the approach.

Overall great first week showing from both of you guys, but honestly I'm leaning towards TopicalDood5....but change your name please.

03-25-2013, 12:27 PM	#11
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Damn great battle you two for your first week here. Props. Brass Body: As a huge boxing fan I fucking loved the story here. The read was easy as hell because of your writing. Great multies dispersed throughout the piece to get it entertaining and create a truly vivid image of the damage incurred on a boxer during his career. All in all I gotta say you've got talent man. I enjoyed this props. TopicalDood5: I hate your name, but from the opening line of your piece I knew I was gonna love your piece haha. You have a way with words truly that makes every line a standout and repeatable. That's something that's very hard to do and I have to give you props for that. As far as the story goes, excellent story and I have nothing negative to say about it because I loved the approach. Overall great first week showing from both of you guys, but honestly I'm leaning towards TopicalDood5....but change your name please.