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07-01-2014, 08:46 PM
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This was pretty good, I enjoyed your story here. The rhyme schemes weren't too complex, and the vocabulary wasn't spectacular. But it was still solid writing. I didn't really like the ending though, thought it could've been expanded. You could've added a bit more. Good drop though. I'll be looking out for more of your open mics in the future
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