The Rising Of Tarsis

Dragon · 06-28-2014, 03:14 PM

In a kingdom ruled by a malevolent tyrant - spreading his violence like the deadliest virus
Echos are heard from the crevice of silence - alas bellowing words are set to be rising
For in the distance General Tarsis is shedding light on his federal squadron of a grueling plot
To over-rule and trot the ruler gone - for in this land of famine - all they have is food for thought...

General Tarsis's Speech

As Revolutions governing wind brushes my skin - I come to amend this repugnant land with succulent lips
Dusk will begin the dawn of hundreds of men - when they apprehend my speech of trusting content
"Over the years - we've witnessed the king's tyranny reign - he was ruthless in execution and giving us pain
Well now - it's time for retribution in limitless ways - may our sorrow set sail and start drifting away
We are living astray from a quality life - the cause of this madness I pondered at night
It all started when his reign wandered upright - bringing forth darkness to squander our light
Spawning our plight till we were dogs in his sight - he poisoned our crops to leave us rotten in blight
He's the monarch of spite sparking the cardinal vice - with no regard for what's wrong and what's right
He has no honor or spine - when he calls us to fight - so on this final order we'll demolish his shrine
For all of the time he spent blocking our shine - will be paid for with the cost of his life
You're my army tonight - marching with might - keep the fire inside you sparking forever
For on this day when we embark and endeavor - you'll remember the date we conquered together
No more tarnishing weather will plague the skies - we'll sleep on clouds knowing it's safe at night
And our wives will experience a playful sight - when our children frolic on grass during graceful times
Keep that fate in mind - and we won't falter or lose - we will succeed I'm promising you
Let us march our feet to stop the abuse - for the voice of change is calling us troops...

Be Ready to charge and let loose..."

And so we solemnly march through this land of dictation - our souls filled with mass inspiration
Passing peasants of angst and starvation - for they felt the full effects of this famishing nation
We are The King's men - but this is an act of invasion - a channeling statement of grand assault
The hands of Revolution will grasp us all - when we arrive standing tall - to make his castle fall...

Soldiers...

Ready your weapons for in several seconds we'll be steadily stepping on the yard of his Kingdom
He has guards, archers, and marksman as defense - with enough fire power to harvest a spring sun
But we are the elite ones - rangers with a gift - they are the weak ones - strangers to their niche
So when I give word - begin aiming with intent - to take out the two men stationed at the bridge!
"FIRE!"...
And the enemies hit with marksman precision - but above Archer's are driven to start shooting their arrows
Quicker than thunder they begin hitting our numbers - so we swiftly advance to move from the peril
With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack
Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap
Now we advance up flights of stairs till are sights are flared with Marksman blaring their muskets at us
Their remorseless fleet is intense as they murder a majority of my men - and render me covered in blood
But I'm not going to fold for I'm close to my goal - I could almost hear The King cower in his chambers
So as the proudest of traitors and foulest invader - I channel my anger on these scoundrels of danger!
Loading my musket with bullets - I trust it and pull it - murdering every marksman in the room
"Alas, we made it' I say to my staggering crew - It's time we open our majesty's tomb...

And so we open the door to where The King resides - prepared with his doom...

There was our King - hiding in shadows - frightened - defenseless to the crime I'll unravel.
"I stand before you you're majesty - bringing forth tragedy - for your reign will end tonight at the castle"
My men begin to celebrate - with destined grace - as I ready my musket for execution
But first things first I think in my twisted mind - for my lips have lied to you Brother's of Revolution...

And so in a twist of events - General Tarsis points his musket at his own men...

*BLAST*...

***

I have succumbed to my sin for I've killed all my gullible men - as my heart is filled with fire and brimstone
For my time has finally come - I've intertwined with the sun - as I reign over the sire and his throne
"I'm done following orders - I've abolished your quarters - and my army was light for seeking the darkness
Now I'll take your breath - and with your death - I'll rule over a new land - The Kingdom Of Tarsis!"

As General Tarsis murders the King with a maniacal laugh - the sky darkens marking his triumph alas
For as a tyrant has passed - a new one is born - one more relentless and vile than the last
He plans to reign for decades to come as a devilish one - as the clock ticks under his tower
For when his stomach growled in this land of famine - he was merely - Hungry For Power

Dragon · 06-28-2014, 03:16 PM

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ROUKE · 06-28-2014, 05:09 PM

Very enjoyable read. I liked how original the theme was and the story telling was on point. Nice diction & multi-syllable rhymes as well. It really made the story come alive.

With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack
Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap

^^
Very nice

06-28-2014, 03:14 PM	#1
Dragon Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 83 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	The Rising Of Tarsis In a kingdom ruled by a malevolent tyrant - spreading his violence like the deadliest virus Echos are heard from the crevice of silence - alas bellowing words are set to be rising For in the distance General Tarsis is shedding light on his federal squadron of a grueling plot To over-rule and trot the ruler gone - for in this land of famine - all they have is food for thought... General Tarsis's Speech As Revolutions governing wind brushes my skin - I come to amend this repugnant land with succulent lips Dusk will begin the dawn of hundreds of men - when they apprehend my speech of trusting content "Over the years - we've witnessed the king's tyranny reign - he was ruthless in execution and giving us pain Well now - it's time for retribution in limitless ways - may our sorrow set sail and start drifting away We are living astray from a quality life - the cause of this madness I pondered at night It all started when his reign wandered upright - bringing forth darkness to squander our light Spawning our plight till we were dogs in his sight - he poisoned our crops to leave us rotten in blight He's the monarch of spite sparking the cardinal vice - with no regard for what's wrong and what's right He has no honor or spine - when he calls us to fight - so on this final order we'll demolish his shrine For all of the time he spent blocking our shine - will be paid for with the cost of his life You're my army tonight - marching with might - keep the fire inside you sparking forever For on this day when we embark and endeavor - you'll remember the date we conquered together No more tarnishing weather will plague the skies - we'll sleep on clouds knowing it's safe at night And our wives will experience a playful sight - when our children frolic on grass during graceful times Keep that fate in mind - and we won't falter or lose - we will succeed I'm promising you Let us march our feet to stop the abuse - for the voice of change is calling us troops... Be Ready to charge and let loose..." And so we solemnly march through this land of dictation - our souls filled with mass inspiration Passing peasants of angst and starvation - for they felt the full effects of this famishing nation We are The King's men - but this is an act of invasion - a channeling statement of grand assault The hands of Revolution will grasp us all - when we arrive standing tall - to make his castle fall... Soldiers... Ready your weapons for in several seconds we'll be steadily stepping on the yard of his Kingdom He has guards, archers, and marksman as defense - with enough fire power to harvest a spring sun But we are the elite ones - rangers with a gift - they are the weak ones - strangers to their niche So when I give word - begin aiming with intent - to take out the two men stationed at the bridge! "FIRE!"... And the enemies hit with marksman precision - but above Archer's are driven to start shooting their arrows Quicker than thunder they begin hitting our numbers - so we swiftly advance to move from the peril With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap Now we advance up flights of stairs till are sights are flared with Marksman blaring their muskets at us Their remorseless fleet is intense as they murder a majority of my men - and render me covered in blood But I'm not going to fold for I'm close to my goal - I could almost hear The King cower in his chambers So as the proudest of traitors and foulest invader - I channel my anger on these scoundrels of danger! Loading my musket with bullets - I trust it and pull it - murdering every marksman in the room "Alas, we made it' I say to my staggering crew - It's time we open our majesty's tomb... And so we open the door to where The King resides - prepared with his doom... There was our King - hiding in shadows - frightened - defenseless to the crime I'll unravel. "I stand before you you're majesty - bringing forth tragedy - for your reign will end tonight at the castle" My men begin to celebrate - with destined grace - as I ready my musket for execution But first things first I think in my twisted mind - for my lips have lied to you Brother's of Revolution... And so in a twist of events - General Tarsis points his musket at his own men... BLAST... *** I have succumbed to my sin for I've killed all my gullible men - as my heart is filled with fire and brimstone For my time has finally come - I've intertwined with the sun - as I reign over the sire and his throne "I'm done following orders - I've abolished your quarters - and my army was light for seeking the darkness Now I'll take your breath - and with your death - I'll rule over a new land - The Kingdom Of Tarsis!" As General Tarsis murders the King with a maniacal laugh - the sky darkens marking his triumph alas For as a tyrant has passed - a new one is born - one more relentless and vile than the last He plans to reign for decades to come as a devilish one - as the clock ticks under his tower For when his stomach growled in this land of famine - he was merely - Hungry For Power Last edited by Dragon; 08-14-2018 at 10:18 PM.

06-28-2014, 03:16 PM	#2
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06-28-2014, 05:09 PM	#3
ROUKE Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Very enjoyable read. I liked how original the theme was and the story telling was on point. Nice diction & multi-syllable rhymes as well. It really made the story come alive. With wrath as our force - we blast through the door of the castle where guards are armed for attack Yet my army is fast - at barraging a task - so we spark up a blast turning their armored squadron to scrap ^^ Very nice